Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Reflecting"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from mauial
I can easily relate to this. I have a place of reflection too, my boyhood home in an isolated area, that I often spend two nights at by myself with my wifeʻs blessings. She prefers the comforts of home.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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I can easily relate to this. I have a place of reflection too, my boyhood home in an isolated area, that I often spend two nights at by myself with my wifeʻs blessings. She prefers the comforts of home.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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mauial, it is great to have a quite (sacred) to and recharge, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Raul1
The mountain sure does reflect the past of our memories. It is a delightful poem. I see no mistakes. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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The mountain sure does reflect the past of our memories. It is a delightful poem. I see no mistakes. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Raul, thanks!
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You're welcome!
Comment from l.raven
with all the unrest in our lives....
it feels wonderful when we can find that one place
we can unwind...breathe in beautiful times in our lives...
very nicely written...I love your poem...and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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with all the unrest in our lives....
it feels wonderful when we can find that one place
we can unwind...breathe in beautiful times in our lives...
very nicely written...I love your poem...and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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l.raven, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
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your sooooo very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very solid presentation. Reflection is usually 'Soul Searching' and leads to doing or being the best you can be. So, we should always find time for that sort of contemplation. Well done. A good contest entry.
Ralf
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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A very solid presentation. Reflection is usually 'Soul Searching' and leads to doing or being the best you can be. So, we should always find time for that sort of contemplation. Well done. A good contest entry.
Ralf
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Ralf, over the years have been able to retreat at some very special retreats locations that I call "thin spaces", but personally, nature tops all the them, as an especially "thin space" where I can commune with the Divine.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty five syllable poem about reflection in many aspects of life is needed to keep focused on the future to determine where you find from and where you are heading
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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A very well-written twenty five syllable poem about reflection in many aspects of life is needed to keep focused on the future to determine where you find from and where you are heading
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Bichon
An interesting poem! While it was short, the message was significant, as was the imagery used in combination to get it across. It is often a good thing to look back on memories of better days!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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An interesting poem! While it was short, the message was significant, as was the imagery used in combination to get it across. It is often a good thing to look back on memories of better days!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Bichon, we are so fortunate that we can sit in repose with our past experiences and bring up the feelings the thoughts provoke, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the twenty-five syllables contest
with a nice play on the duplicity of "reflecting."
Images, altered by the soft ripples of water and time.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the twenty-five syllables contest
with a nice play on the duplicity of "reflecting."
Images, altered by the soft ripples of water and time.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Robert, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are inspiring, interesting and creative. I liked
the way the author reflects upon the past. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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The author's words are inspiring, interesting and creative. I liked
the way the author reflects upon the past. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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harmony, my weekend is well on into one of Joy and good busyness, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent twenty five syllable poem, with a great theme, It's been awhile since looked at my reflection in the mirror, except to trim my beard. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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This is an excellent twenty five syllable poem, with a great theme, It's been awhile since looked at my reflection in the mirror, except to trim my beard. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Roy, my friend, well my razor slipped this week and I found I needed to shave off my Covid chin beard....maybe it is a sign of cleaner times ahead
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Dear boy, how awful.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a great photo.
-You have written a
good poem with good
syllable count and topic.
-The imagery is effective,
and you paint a good word
picture of standing in the stream.
-I also like reflection as the
theme in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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-It is a great photo.
-You have written a
good poem with good
syllable count and topic.
-The imagery is effective,
and you paint a good word
picture of standing in the stream.
-I also like reflection as the
theme in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Pam, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem. MAy your coming week be filled with splendid experiences upon which you will at some time be able to reflect upon.
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You are very welcome and I appreciate your reply. I hope you have a good day and upcoming week, too.