Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Infinite"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from elchupakabra
This is a great piece, it almost sounds like guided meditation. I thought you did a good job with the soothing tone overall. Great work on this free verse, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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This is a great piece, it almost sounds like guided meditation. I thought you did a good job with the soothing tone overall. Great work on this free verse, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I love it! Yes the circle of life from one step to the other is infinite in its action from day to day. Tiny unknow whisps encircle our circle ready to appear without warning and we are prepared to deal with every little whisp. I may not be thinking of the same galaxy as you but I think I get your drift.
"A life cycle experience
within a circle!" The circle of life! Well done.
Ralf
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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I love it! Yes the circle of life from one step to the other is infinite in its action from day to day. Tiny unknow whisps encircle our circle ready to appear without warning and we are prepared to deal with every little whisp. I may not be thinking of the same galaxy as you but I think I get your drift.
"A life cycle experience
within a circle!" The circle of life! Well done.
Ralf
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Ralf, thank you for this precious six-star validation!
Comment from MissMerri
This is a most creative way of writing about circles. I felt as if I were spiraling into a web of mystery, or as if I'd somehow fallen into a kaleidoscope of tumbling stars. At any rate, reading this was a fun experience. (Did you accidentally leave out the 'a' in this line? "even if it is as big as *(a) hula hoop.") It is a wonderful free verse visually tantalizing.
I want to try a circle poem too. ~ MM
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This is a most creative way of writing about circles. I felt as if I were spiraling into a web of mystery, or as if I'd somehow fallen into a kaleidoscope of tumbling stars. At any rate, reading this was a fun experience. (Did you accidentally leave out the 'a' in this line? "even if it is as big as *(a) hula hoop.") It is a wonderful free verse visually tantalizing.
I want to try a circle poem too. ~ MM
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Miss Meri you have a good eye, thank you!
Comment from royowen
I suspect that even if was small, and one put a droplet of water in a tiny circle it would look identical to this marvellous artwork you've perceptively downloaded, well done, your around abilities with poetic forms has become amazing, great job, blessings Roy
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I suspect that even if was small, and one put a droplet of water in a tiny circle it would look identical to this marvellous artwork you've perceptively downloaded, well done, your around abilities with poetic forms has become amazing, great job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Roy, I am smiling back my friend. Thank you for the compliment!
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Welcome Jim