Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "How I Write Free Verse"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
You've pictured very well the writer's life. Whether a poetic, essayist, novelist much of your piece describes our day. We all pull on our experiences and attempt to put them into words that encourage or perhaps take someone on a mental journey. I particularly like this verse, "Mind swirling within a current thought,
or tiptoeing around a harsh memory, at times,
I lightly caress a deep feeling that trickles like
a small stream beginning a downward flow."
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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You've pictured very well the writer's life. Whether a poetic, essayist, novelist much of your piece describes our day. We all pull on our experiences and attempt to put them into words that encourage or perhaps take someone on a mental journey. I particularly like this verse, "Mind swirling within a current thought,
or tiptoeing around a harsh memory, at times,
I lightly caress a deep feeling that trickles like
a small stream beginning a downward flow."
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Right on! Thanks for the evaluation.
Comment from Boogienights
I never thought of free verse that way, like a recipe put together to please. I love how you describe your " ingredients" and what each one brings to to the dish. This is a great contest entry, best of luck.
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I never thought of free verse that way, like a recipe put together to please. I love how you describe your " ingredients" and what each one brings to to the dish. This is a great contest entry, best of luck.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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I appreciate your kind thoughts and input on this poem.