Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your free verse on light is 'enlightening'. You weave your words so well in your poems and always with so much meaning a spirit behind them. It is not hard to grasp your eloquent meaning.
Ralf
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Your free verse on light is 'enlightening'. You weave your words so well in your poems and always with so much meaning a spirit behind them. It is not hard to grasp your eloquent meaning.
Ralf
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Ralf, I do love free verse! I so appreciate your validation in your kind comments.
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I am glad you get my true meaning.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient twilight as the sun has just disappeared and the street lamp helps to light the night and if it fails we have trouble seeing in those shadows, you set the scene here an that is a wonderful photograph too, love Dolly x
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An ambient twilight as the sun has just disappeared and the street lamp helps to light the night and if it fails we have trouble seeing in those shadows, you set the scene here an that is a wonderful photograph too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Dolly, thank you much!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks there are many sources from which human eyes can see the light, even in absence of manmade lights; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This poem speaks there are many sources from which human eyes can see the light, even in absence of manmade lights; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Alcreator, thanks for your time invested to read and comment on my free verse on light sources.
Comment from TommyWrites
This is beautifully fantastic JLR!
Even without the beautiful picture, you have done a wonderful job painting this lovely & emotional image in your readers mind. I love how you wrote your poem in such a clever way, light coming in place of the twinkling stars, etc. I almost pictured it like a giant paint brush just sweeping over the city with light.
I, like most of your poems, throughly enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for sharing,
TommyWrites~
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This is beautifully fantastic JLR!
Even without the beautiful picture, you have done a wonderful job painting this lovely & emotional image in your readers mind. I love how you wrote your poem in such a clever way, light coming in place of the twinkling stars, etc. I almost pictured it like a giant paint brush just sweeping over the city with light.
I, like most of your poems, throughly enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for sharing,
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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TommyWrites, I always value the time you invest to read and comment on my poems. FRee verse is my comfort zone, while I dance through many poetic forms to expand my skill set.
Comment from Pantygynt
Were you aware I wonder that some of my teaching is rubbing off on you. This could well have been an entry for the very latest class assignment. 'Metre in free verse!' Line two here is a rare example of a catalectic trochaic hexameter.
You have grabbed at the topic with both hands.
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Were you aware I wonder that some of my teaching is rubbing off on you. This could well have been an entry for the very latest class assignment. 'Metre in free verse!' Line two here is a rare example of a catalectic trochaic hexameter.
You have grabbed at the topic with both hands.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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My dear friend thank you for this validation! Right now, I find I do need the extra words of encouragement. I am learning so much from you and the Old Man upstairs willing, I will partake of your wisdom for another decade.
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a contest entry. Your poem made sense, and touched the reader emotionally. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy .
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This should have been a contest entry. Your poem made sense, and touched the reader emotionally. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy .
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Earl thank you for this kind validation.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Nice photo and poem, JLR. The morning sky sometimes displays Venus, a very tired moon, And then the rising sun hides their light for another day.
Excellent contest entry. I like the photo too.
Good luck
Cindy
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Nice photo and poem, JLR. The morning sky sometimes displays Venus, a very tired moon, And then the rising sun hides their light for another day.
Excellent contest entry. I like the photo too.
Good luck
Cindy
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Hi Dindy, thank you no contest entry this time, just a fun club challenge, you should join us.
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I would like to join after I get my life (Apartment) in order again. And I?m really behind in reviews. But I hope you keep me in mind. Thank you!
Comment from dmt1967
This is one of those poems where the picture and words gel so well together I have to ask, what came first, the picture or the poem? Great poem and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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This is one of those poems where the picture and words gel so well together I have to ask, what came first, the picture or the poem? Great poem and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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dmt, always for me the words then the sourcing of a matching photo, I love to find the perfect pairing, thanks for your positive encouragement.