Comment from RodG

Excellent

How appropriate your Joseph's star is on this Sunday before Easter. I feel like I am listening to a sermon telling us about Christ's imminent return. Yes, we should "Hear" and "Pray."
Your message comes through very clearly.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thank you Rod, 🙏🙏

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like the emphasis on your opening and closing words.
-I like how you used various means of communication,
with words, song, and writing.
-I like the line "Sages spoke."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

I appreciate your feedback, thank you.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Apr-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This Joseph's Star poem, A Known Truth, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that God has promised to return and set all things right.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thanks Bill!

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This a thought provoking and emotional poem. Your passion for your faith comes shining through much like the sun in the image you selected.
I think you have left your reader to ponder your strong message.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

K.L. Ahh?yes! Thank you, 🙏🙏