Seething dust
A poem49 total reviews
Comment from aryr
The picture was beautiful and majestic, Roy. I enjoyed your words because they said without a doubt that God and Christ was truly there for you. Blessings.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
The picture was beautiful and majestic, Roy. I enjoyed your words because they said without a doubt that God and Christ was truly there for you. Blessings.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Alie, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you,my brother. This is penned just for me. I have been sitting here wondering what to pray, bewildering really. Thank you for for this. I prayed it aloud now and feel the Lord in the quiet. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
Thank you,my brother. This is penned just for me. I have been sitting here wondering what to pray, bewildering really. Thank you for for this. I prayed it aloud now and feel the Lord in the quiet. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Sally, you are an inspiration, it?s hard to pray sometimes, thanks for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lilly Flowers
this is one of the best inspirational poems i've read
my favorite line is your faith will grant you sight
wonderful rhythm and, of course, excellent rhymes
blessings, lilly
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
this is one of the best inspirational poems i've read
my favorite line is your faith will grant you sight
wonderful rhythm and, of course, excellent rhymes
blessings, lilly
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Lilly, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, Roy. It's a little unclear where the poet stops talking and God starts talking. The message is very clear, and it is a very good one.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
Nicely done, Roy. It's a little unclear where the poet stops talking and God starts talking. The message is very clear, and it is a very good one.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Paul, , for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. I like how you showed us one of God's creatures in such a positive light and turned it on the end in a subtle way of reminding us. The poem is well written - beautiful and natural rhyme scheme. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
I thought this was very creative. I like how you showed us one of God's creatures in such a positive light and turned it on the end in a subtle way of reminding us. The poem is well written - beautiful and natural rhyme scheme. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Michael, , for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
Beautiful post, my friend :) The photo is captivating and perfect for your poem.
The message stands clear. This part really caught my eye:
The eagle soars where none will dwell above the valley floor,
He does not fear though thunder roars he flies near Heaven's door.
I bring the daylight to the dawn, I grant the dove its flight,
if I can set the stars in place, then I can grant you sight.
I enjoyed reading all your posts this morning. It starts off my day with inspiration.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
Beautiful post, my friend :) The photo is captivating and perfect for your poem.
The message stands clear. This part really caught my eye:
The eagle soars where none will dwell above the valley floor,
He does not fear though thunder roars he flies near Heaven's door.
I bring the daylight to the dawn, I grant the dove its flight,
if I can set the stars in place, then I can grant you sight.
I enjoyed reading all your posts this morning. It starts off my day with inspiration.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much dear one, you are an inspiration.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Another A-1 piece my friend, though the one thought that I asked myself was has an eagle or a hawk ever been struck by lightning in flight? Silly, but consider the source. :-)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
Another A-1 piece my friend, though the one thought that I asked myself was has an eagle or a hawk ever been struck by lightning in flight? Silly, but consider the source. :-)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Tom, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
This poem encourages to not be afraid of the threats and crisis that life may bring because the Lord will protect us. He is always there whenever trouble surrounds us and if we endure trouble the Lord is on our side and he will do what is in our best interest. There is more in store than this world can offer.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
This poem encourages to not be afraid of the threats and crisis that life may bring because the Lord will protect us. He is always there whenever trouble surrounds us and if we endure trouble the Lord is on our side and he will do what is in our best interest. There is more in store than this world can offer.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Beth,, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Roy,
This well written poem tells us what faith is and does. It gives us hope and inner strength. I like that the poem is from the point of view of both man and God.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on your second place finish in the contest.
Have a great week.
Joan
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
Hi Roy,
This well written poem tells us what faith is and does. It gives us hope and inner strength. I like that the poem is from the point of view of both man and God.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on your second place finish in the contest.
Have a great week.
Joan
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Joan, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Don?t mention it, Roy.
Joan