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Can faith guide our path?
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Ben Colder
Looks as if have a soon coming wedding and replacing the dog , a good move on Seth's part. Barbar , I see nothing wrong with write unless you feel rushed in some places. Your stories are always interesting.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
I was wondering about the rushing part, and I pause and thought about it, but it would have been simply added words with no substance. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Ben Colder on 03-Mar-2024
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