Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a great poem with the right answer at the end. Living with love can't
be beat. I do enjoy blank verse but simply can't write it. This was very good and makes me jealous. You write great prose and now prove you can write really good blank verse.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Carol. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a powerful poem! I think you've done a wonderful job with this poem.
The phrase "dust that's blown away by wings of Death" is haunting yet beautiful! I love the way you end with the question about love being enough. Keep sharing these profound insights! They are wonderful to read.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Michael. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Hey Tony, I have always been fascinated by cemeteries and the tombstones with a person's name and two dates; Date of birth and death, leaving one to wonder about all the in-between.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Thanks very much for your review, Don. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony