Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely done. Clear picture of aerial skiers even without the wonderful artwork.
I see no errors.
Congrats on the win and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Nicely done. Clear picture of aerial skiers even without the wonderful artwork.
I see no errors.
Congrats on the win and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the congratulations and best wishes.
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Your welcome.
Comment from boberto
Timelt entry, Amada. Not only pertinent, but also
a winner. Congratulations. I like the way you associated
the sport to poetry---in motion. I haven't watched much of the Olympics, but I do like to watch the acrobatic ski jumps, etc.
boberto
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Timelt entry, Amada. Not only pertinent, but also
a winner. Congratulations. I like the way you associated
the sport to poetry---in motion. I haven't watched much of the Olympics, but I do like to watch the acrobatic ski jumps, etc.
boberto
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you boberto. I have been glued to the Olympics. My father loved all sort of sports. He passed away many years ago. I felt compelled to wathc this event, I feel close to his spirit. If he were alive, we would be right there in Vancouver!
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I just came back from there a month ago. We spent almost a month over on Vancouver Island, in Victoria. Wife is Canadian and has family there.
I also love sports, hard for me to watch/listen to TV.
boberto
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Amada,
An excellent rictameter about those amazing skiers. You have captured a breathtaking image and the picture is perfect. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Anabella
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Hi Amada,
An excellent rictameter about those amazing skiers. You have captured a breathtaking image and the picture is perfect. Congratulations on winning the contest!
Anabella
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Anabella for the congratulations!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi amada,
It is easy to see why your poem won the contest. It is a perfect in description of the skiers we have watched in awe.
Congrats! Blessings....chey
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Hi amada,
It is easy to see why your poem won the contest. It is a perfect in description of the skiers we have watched in awe.
Congrats! Blessings....chey
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Hi chey, great reviewer of my work. Thank you!
Comment from Agrona
Poets of gravity captures the essences of these ski events very well. Your poem flowed very well and I enjoyed the imagery that your words evoked. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Poets of gravity captures the essences of these ski events very well. Your poem flowed very well and I enjoyed the imagery that your words evoked. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Agrona for reviewing this work!
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a great contest entry, it is well presented, well edited, and the words are deep and meaningful. There are no errors or adjustments needed
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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This is a great contest entry, it is well presented, well edited, and the words are deep and meaningful. There are no errors or adjustments needed
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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This is a great review. Thank you!
Comment from Loke
Nice poem. I found it to be scenic. I like you illusions of skiers. You take it to the limit. I give it five very high stars!!
Evan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Nice poem. I found it to be scenic. I like you illusions of skiers. You take it to the limit. I give it five very high stars!!
Evan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Evan for reviewing this work on the Olympic skiers.
Comment from melyuki
Hi amada, what fabulous words to describe these amazing athletes.. your words soar high into the sky bringing joy and pride to these wonderfully skilled masters of their art.. you would have done them proud , if they could read your words.. should be an advertisement for the skiing olympian... hugs to you , a fantastically emotional verse... luv melxxx
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Hi amada, what fabulous words to describe these amazing athletes.. your words soar high into the sky bringing joy and pride to these wonderfully skilled masters of their art.. you would have done them proud , if they could read your words.. should be an advertisement for the skiing olympian... hugs to you , a fantastically emotional verse... luv melxxx
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the idea! Maybe I could try to send it to the Olympic Commitee. I will check on line. Thanks!
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
You have conveyed your admiration for the skill of the skier in this perfect rictameter format.
You have skillfully united the idea of poetry and the skier in 'poets of gravity.
A perfecrt description.
Juliette
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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You have conveyed your admiration for the skill of the skier in this perfect rictameter format.
You have skillfully united the idea of poetry and the skier in 'poets of gravity.
A perfecrt description.
Juliette
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Juliette for the great review to my work.
Comment from Realist101
First, congratulations! This is a clearly excellent poem, and how right you are, these people are dare-devils for sure. Very scary photo too!! :) Susan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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First, congratulations! This is a clearly excellent poem, and how right you are, these people are dare-devils for sure. Very scary photo too!! :) Susan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Susan!