Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "As I wander through time and space"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi deepwater,
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is a touching view of rememberance of those you love and your reflection of days gone by. Good rhyme and flow. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Hi deepwater,
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is a touching view of rememberance of those you love and your reflection of days gone by. Good rhyme and flow. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading becky
Comment from RADIO
You touch all hearts with
this loving poem of loved
ones no longer in our time
and space but still and evermore
in our every breath.
Until we meet again. Beautiful words.
Radio
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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You touch all hearts with
this loving poem of loved
ones no longer in our time
and space but still and evermore
in our every breath.
Until we meet again. Beautiful words.
Radio
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Radio for this review Gary
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi deepwater,
Nice tribute to your mom and grandmother. It draws up some good images of a childhood and adult relationship. Good work.
Patrick
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Hi deepwater,
Nice tribute to your mom and grandmother. It draws up some good images of a childhood and adult relationship. Good work.
Patrick
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Patrick
Comment from percival86jack
Wow! What a beautiful, tender remembrance of your dear Mom and Gram. It actually brought a lump to my throat... passionately written, Gary! Cheers, Jack
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Wow! What a beautiful, tender remembrance of your dear Mom and Gram. It actually brought a lump to my throat... passionately written, Gary! Cheers, Jack
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you jack
Comment from Belinda
Hi, deepwater, what a touching tribute for the two most important women of your life. You're right, little things mean a lot if there is a strong bond. I like the innocence these lines show:
Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear
(PS. Wonderful picture!)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Hi, deepwater, what a touching tribute for the two most important women of your life. You're right, little things mean a lot if there is a strong bond. I like the innocence these lines show:
Dear Mom and Gram I miss you dear
But see you in my dreams
The stars at night do whisper your names
My heart still carries a tear
(PS. Wonderful picture!)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Belinda
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
A wonderful Wednesday morning to you Poet! I am sure they would be honored by your tribute to them. It's great to own fond memories like this.
I enjoyed, LOyd
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A wonderful Wednesday morning to you Poet! I am sure they would be honored by your tribute to them. It's great to own fond memories like this.
I enjoyed, LOyd
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Loyd
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A very good Wednesday morning to you poet friend and you are so welcome, Loyd
Comment from misscookie
Would you believe last night I dreamt about my mother who went to heaven 2009 for the first time,not that I didn't think about her and other love one a lot.
Is this a picture of your love ones they have a lovely smile.
Your poem is very touching. I'm sorry for your lost. Remember they are in a better place, have a niceday.
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Would you believe last night I dreamt about my mother who went to heaven 2009 for the first time,not that I didn't think about her and other love one a lot.
Is this a picture of your love ones they have a lovely smile.
Your poem is very touching. I'm sorry for your lost. Remember they are in a better place, have a niceday.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Miss C
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You are very welcome.
Comment from honeytree
I loved the art work here very much. The words have been beautifully written and what memories one has, with these two special persons.
It's the little things our loved ones have done for us, that mean a lot.
Honey tree.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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I loved the art work here very much. The words have been beautifully written and what memories one has, with these two special persons.
It's the little things our loved ones have done for us, that mean a lot.
Honey tree.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Honey
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I am glad you liked the review. I enjoyed reading very much.
Honey tree.
Comment from Hitcher
It is a very nice smooth flowing poem deepwater, the rhyming was well crafted and I loved your closing two lines;
The stars at night do whisper your name
My heart still carries a tear.
Well done friend!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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It is a very nice smooth flowing poem deepwater, the rhyming was well crafted and I loved your closing two lines;
The stars at night do whisper your name
My heart still carries a tear.
Well done friend!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you Hitcher
Comment from marcellawachtel
Memory is a powerful force in your life as you delve into your past; Your mother and grandmother are never far from your thoughts and you are looking forward to meet them "someday". this poem is written very simply and directly.
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Memory is a powerful force in your life as you delve into your past; Your mother and grandmother are never far from your thoughts and you are looking forward to meet them "someday". this poem is written very simply and directly.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading