Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Good chapter, your characters are now nicely established and the build up to the reunion continues. Somehow I suspect there will be fireworks at the dance.

Patrick

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

The fireworks start at the dance and it continues to get worse. Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Arkine

Excellent

Hmmm, I have to agree should be interesting at the reunion. Good chapter! Just one thing:

or I wouldn't have made you cry. (")I'm batting a thousand. - stray quote

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

I thought I took care of that stray quote I will go do it again. I am beginning to think it will stay no matter what I do. Thank you for your kind review.

reply by Arkine on 14-Jul-2010

~L~ Yeah, I've had a few of those happen to me. ;)

Comment from lola29

Excellent

I like how their relationship is developing--slowly and strongly. It's obvious they like each other, but I think Joe's giving her room to relax. Very nice chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review and continued support. I think Sara needs the extra time for a relationship.

Comment from anabelle

Excellent

Good chapter. I enjoyed their interactions, and it seems the tension between them is building. What happens on Sunday if he leaves?

Thanks for the good read.

Regards, anabelle

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

We will have to wait and see. Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from skye

Excellent

This is a really good chapter. Introducing him to her daughter was effective. I like the fact that he didn't gloat about being able to run faster.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from zoocq

Excellent

Thank you for your continued writing about these characters...although the characters are strong and the dialog so realistic...your other reviewers may be right...maybe more location detail...maybe some more background on Joe..how was he affected by war...town description...a few more characters...I am not an expert...I love the story!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

There will be more characters introduced as they are needed as will more details about the town and Joe's occupation. I have also taken hits for putting irrevlant information in this novels. Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Your character Sarah is delightful and well developed. Your narrative and dialogue is strong and fast paced. Well done!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This was a good read from beginning to end. You have set the stage for a magical night for Joe and Sara. I cannot wait to read about the reunion.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review and continued support.

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

I am looking forward to seeing what events the reunion will bring on and how they interact with each other while there. Joe surely seems smitten already.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for your kind review and contunued support.

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

A really good chapter,
Barbara - the relationship
is strengthening, and I'm
looking forward to see what
this reunion brings.

An interesting read, my friend.

Margaret

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2010

Thank you for the continued support.