Another Pretty Face
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Comment from jadapenn
He is quite the daring fellow, our Joe. I love his go. Poor Sara is scared of getting into a situation where she has to face life without him. Nice chapter as these two get closer.
Well done. I never see gremlins to clobber. :)
Luv jada
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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He is quite the daring fellow, our Joe. I love his go. Poor Sara is scared of getting into a situation where she has to face life without him. Nice chapter as these two get closer.
Well done. I never see gremlins to clobber. :)
Luv jada
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you Jada, for your kind review and continued support. I appreciat hearing from you.
Comment from bhogg
Joe is such a romantic - that must mean you are too! Another great chapter. I'm taking a late lunch, so lunch with Barbara. LOL Bill
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Joe is such a romantic - that must mean you are too! Another great chapter. I'm taking a late lunch, so lunch with Barbara. LOL Bill
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for stopping by. What did we eat? I always enjoy hearing from you and yes, I am a die hard romantic.
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My wife takes such good care of me. Had I been travelling it would have been junk. Left over poached salmon with dill sauce on lettuce. I complained of course, but it was pretty good!
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I am sure it was delicious and very healthy.
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Yes, but I still claim my right to complain. Guaranteed in the Constituion you know! I don't really complain, because I wake up every day realizing how blessed I really am.
Comment from fishcantswim
Another well written chapter (part of).
Speech is natural and everything flows well.
Nothing feels out of place or unnatural.
More good work. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Another well written chapter (part of).
Speech is natural and everything flows well.
Nothing feels out of place or unnatural.
More good work. :-)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CKLA
Oh, if only there were more Joe's in this world. LOL. This is a great chapter. They are finally adressing the issues. I enjoyed the bits of humor in this. Looking forward to the next part.
Collette
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Oh, if only there were more Joe's in this world. LOL. This is a great chapter. They are finally adressing the issues. I enjoyed the bits of humor in this. Looking forward to the next part.
Collette
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Tellis
This chapter was excellent and I think he has some resources at his disposal to keep the relationship going. Keep up the great work.
Tellis
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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This chapter was excellent and I think he has some resources at his disposal to keep the relationship going. Keep up the great work.
Tellis
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from bookishfabler
Good for you, Joe Barnes. The little town seems like a whole bunch of imature teenagers. Another great chapter and I have nothing to pick on. No nits no spags. Just looking forward to the next one.
hugs book
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Good for you, Joe Barnes. The little town seems like a whole bunch of imature teenagers. Another great chapter and I have nothing to pick on. No nits no spags. Just looking forward to the next one.
hugs book
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Renee' J Thomas
I enjoyed this even though I have not read the previous chapters, I will though soon. The story flowed nicely and was easy to read, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this even though I have not read the previous chapters, I will though soon. The story flowed nicely and was easy to read, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, what a lovely guy this
Joe is - I think all your
readers are a wee bit in love
with him - Sara doesn't want
to let a man like him slip
through her fingers.
A really good read, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Oh, what a lovely guy this
Joe is - I think all your
readers are a wee bit in love
with him - Sara doesn't want
to let a man like him slip
through her fingers.
A really good read, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Margaret for your kind review. I appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
That will certainly get the tabbies going. Now all we need is the crooked sheriff to appear and try some smart-assed stunt.
Well written, nice going.
Patrick
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Hi Barbara,
That will certainly get the tabbies going. Now all we need is the crooked sheriff to appear and try some smart-assed stunt.
Well written, nice going.
Patrick
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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We will see the sheriff again, to be sure. Thank you for your kind review.
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I sincerely hope he gets a nasty surprise...
Patrick
Comment from fionageorge
Oh, you gave me goosebumps with this chapter, my friend. Nice ones. Where are the 'Joe's in this world. A man so sensitive to the woman's needs and insecurities. Great descriptive narrative, and wonderful, sensual, warm love scene. As for the dialogue, just perfect.
You couldn't sustain a relationship when you[we?] were both in the same town."
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Oh, you gave me goosebumps with this chapter, my friend. Nice ones. Where are the 'Joe's in this world. A man so sensitive to the woman's needs and insecurities. Great descriptive narrative, and wonderful, sensual, warm love scene. As for the dialogue, just perfect.
You couldn't sustain a relationship when you[we?] were both in the same town."
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 26-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2010
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Nope, it's you. They have never tried to sustain a relationship before. She was refering to an early conversation they had as to why he wasn't married. Thank you for your kind review.