Railroad
poem/song lyrics99 total reviews
Comment from stanishmichelle
The author notes is a nice addition to the poem, which I liked reading. The history of the railroad is one that fascinates, and I like hearing stories about the earlier times when it was being built. I like the picture presented when I read this nice poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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The author notes is a nice addition to the poem, which I liked reading. The history of the railroad is one that fascinates, and I like hearing stories about the earlier times when it was being built. I like the picture presented when I read this nice poem.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from jdrhye
It definitly reads a a song, a ballad or folk song. Reminicent of childhood and when life seemed simpler. To just be and discover life and all its interesting outlets. Hard to believe we once depended on the railroads for most everything! Enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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It definitly reads a a song, a ballad or folk song. Reminicent of childhood and when life seemed simpler. To just be and discover life and all its interesting outlets. Hard to believe we once depended on the railroads for most everything! Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you JD.
Comment from Laurie Clayton
You can almost feel and hear the rhythm
of a frieight train, working it's way
from A-B.
Lots of little images for the reader to
have a mooch over and contemplate.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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You can almost feel and hear the rhythm
of a frieight train, working it's way
from A-B.
Lots of little images for the reader to
have a mooch over and contemplate.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Ha! Mooch over. I love it.
Comment from Gary D. Hardy
Whisper it does, smoothly and softly, lyrically down the screen and is very well written to my thinkin. I am from a rural area in south Ga. and have done my share of rail walking and your right, Nothing like it.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Whisper it does, smoothly and softly, lyrically down the screen and is very well written to my thinkin. I am from a rural area in south Ga. and have done my share of rail walking and your right, Nothing like it.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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I'm glad u agree with the poem and with the rail walkin'.
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I did and it was my pleasure reviewing.
Comment from Kevin C
Great picture to go with this. I really like this and it as a poem or lyrics plays so well either way. I takes one back to thing of the great depression and riding the rails. I could see this in black and white. Great job :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Great picture to go with this. I really like this and it as a poem or lyrics plays so well either way. I takes one back to thing of the great depression and riding the rails. I could see this in black and white. Great job :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you very much Kevin.
Comment from taravan
Very nicely done. Though you speak in your authors notes of this not being a progression of a story I felt it there. The way a story really is. Not fully there in description but emotion. This captures the heart and opens the imagination. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Very nicely done. Though you speak in your authors notes of this not being a progression of a story I felt it there. The way a story really is. Not fully there in description but emotion. This captures the heart and opens the imagination. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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How very nice of you. Thank you.
Comment from pickthorn
What a delightful poem you have penned here. I can imagine Johnny Cash singing this little ditty while riding in a boxcar and watching the countryside flash by. Great work.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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What a delightful poem you have penned here. I can imagine Johnny Cash singing this little ditty while riding in a boxcar and watching the countryside flash by. Great work.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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I thank you sincerely Mr. Pickthorn.
Comment from Dklrdmcches
Interesting piece you have created here. It took a moment in time and captured the feelings of the author. It told of wanting and acceptance. It had eveything a great write should have. Very well done...dark lord
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Interesting piece you have created here. It took a moment in time and captured the feelings of the author. It told of wanting and acceptance. It had eveything a great write should have. Very well done...dark lord
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you dark one.
Comment from JW
This is a nice poem. It stirred up a lot of memories since my father worked over 20 years on the railroad. Thanks for sharing this.
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This is a nice poem. It stirred up a lot of memories since my father worked over 20 years on the railroad. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you. And, hey, thanks for the video. I watched it.
Comment from Wendyanne
Excellent Victor!! I really enjoyed the rhythm and thyme throughout this very well written piece of poetry and the imagery is superb too. I can picture each scene vividly
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Excellent Victor!! I really enjoyed the rhythm and thyme throughout this very well written piece of poetry and the imagery is superb too. I can picture each scene vividly
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks, Ms. Wendy.