Pain
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Comment from Hareem.S
This is a heart wrenching piece. Unbelievably cruel and sad. Makes my heart sink. Very well written. The emotions are on raw display, the intensity is conveyed.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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This is a heart wrenching piece. Unbelievably cruel and sad. Makes my heart sink. Very well written. The emotions are on raw display, the intensity is conveyed.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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Hello Hareem! Thank you so much. YES, and I know about the homeless part all too well. It's just awful. ALmost indescribable. Thank you again...your review is greatly appreciated! Susan
Comment from daniela.albu
A well written flash fiction. Irrespective of the story told, you have an attractive narrative style which touches upon the reader's sensitive chord. The big surprise comes in the end since the story is not about a "she" but a "he."
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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A well written flash fiction. Irrespective of the story told, you have an attractive narrative style which touches upon the reader's sensitive chord. The big surprise comes in the end since the story is not about a "she" but a "he."
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2011
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Hi Daniela...Thank you so much. I do appreciate your bravery in reading this...and also commenting. It's a scary thing, certain aspects of our world...xoxo, susan