Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Part one, Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Karen Stram
I just jumped into the story at this chapter. The writing is excellent. The characters are strong and you are good at writing dialogue.
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I just jumped into the story at this chapter. The writing is excellent. The characters are strong and you are good at writing dialogue.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
Nice hook. One cannot help but wonder where Troy has taken her and why.
You did a great job writing this. No spags were located. JW
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Nice hook. One cannot help but wonder where Troy has taken her and why.
You did a great job writing this. No spags were located. JW
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
A nice flowing chapter that held my attention from the word go. It was nice to see some normality returning after the pressure of the court scenes. I look forward to reading more.
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A nice flowing chapter that held my attention from the word go. It was nice to see some normality returning after the pressure of the court scenes. I look forward to reading more.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
The suspense is killing me, Barbara! A good transition from old life to new one in this post. I stumbled a little over the squirrel exchange, but that may have been eagerness on my part. I want to get on with the story. Well done. :) Nancy
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The suspense is killing me, Barbara! A good transition from old life to new one in this post. I stumbled a little over the squirrel exchange, but that may have been eagerness on my part. I want to get on with the story. Well done. :) Nancy
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Comment from bookishfabler
Okay, now I want to know where he's taking her.
After a gulp, she whispered, "Do you think I'll ever be completely free of Bobby?"
If any character gulps in any book I read, I automatically think of you, my dear. LOL.
Another great chapter of you novel. Thanks for sharing. can't wait for the next one.
hugs Book
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Okay, now I want to know where he's taking her.
After a gulp, she whispered, "Do you think I'll ever be completely free of Bobby?"
If any character gulps in any book I read, I automatically think of you, my dear. LOL.
Another great chapter of you novel. Thanks for sharing. can't wait for the next one.
hugs Book
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Comment from peggles
Anna now divorced from that brutal man will she ever be able completely trust again
Is her future with Troy I wonder
You did a terrific job writing your latest chapter
I look forward to reading more
I hope you give Anna a happier life
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Anna now divorced from that brutal man will she ever be able completely trust again
Is her future with Troy I wonder
You did a terrific job writing your latest chapter
I look forward to reading more
I hope you give Anna a happier life
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, sigh! At last we are done with the courtcase and perhaps now these two can build up some type of relationship. Hope the condition with Troy does not keep them apart. Well written. luv jada
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Hi Barbie, sigh! At last we are done with the courtcase and perhaps now these two can build up some type of relationship. Hope the condition with Troy does not keep them apart. Well written. luv jada
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Comment from robina1978
This one goes back a bit in time from the previous one. Anna just got her divorce, but can't feel safe yet. And certainly is not really ready to trust another man yet.
But he did convince her to come for a picnic and let her son be picked up by his parents. The six is for your whole book. Really enjoy it. Well written and very realistic.
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This one goes back a bit in time from the previous one. Anna just got her divorce, but can't feel safe yet. And certainly is not really ready to trust another man yet.
But he did convince her to come for a picnic and let her son be picked up by his parents. The six is for your whole book. Really enjoy it. Well written and very realistic.
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! love is in the air by the look of things here Barbara old sport.
Well done with another rather splendid write here ma'am.
I really enjoyed this read.
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Wow! love is in the air by the look of things here Barbara old sport.
Well done with another rather splendid write here ma'am.
I really enjoyed this read.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
Anna now faces the uncertainty of ever being able to show complete trust in a relationship following her harrowing ordeal at the hands of a brutal husband
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Anna now faces the uncertainty of ever being able to show complete trust in a relationship following her harrowing ordeal at the hands of a brutal husband
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Thank you for the kind review.