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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from Chris Tee
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Barbara,

This part chapter is another excellent piece and I am so glad Anna made it . Well done with another pleasant read here ma'am.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2012


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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job writing this chapter where anna is suppressing the memories to allow her mind to heal and the family rallies around with food and drink even though she can only have clear liquids

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2012


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Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hello again Barbara
This is quite the chapter. It is full of intrigue, and with your ending, the reader is left to their own conclusions. Superbly written
Bear

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2012


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Comment from micci
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Another well written chapter I have reviewed a few others of yours they are all very interesting, I enjoy reading your story, good job

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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Comment from juliaSjames
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This is a stand alone read for me. But I found it easy to follow due to the clarity of the writing.

The character of Troy emerges strongly in these scenes as a protective, thoughtful friend for Anna.

I see from the author notes that this book is almost at an end. I'll try to catch the next one from the beginning.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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Comment from Allison78
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I think this is a well written chapter in your book. I think you have it set up for some interesting conversations and situations when she starts to remember and how that that might affect her. I'm curious to see how you might wrap that up in just a few chapters. Well done!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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Comment from Fluffyhead
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I want to know what apple salad is and now I want brownies too. I like those barefoot Contessa brownies. You can only eat one of them Otherwise you will end up in a chocolate coma. Love you pieces and how easy they flow. They always leave me wondering wat will happen next

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review. I love brownies too, matter of fact when my boys come home to visit they expect warm brownies wating.
Comment from harmony13
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I enjoyed reading chapter 20. I have read a previous chapter. This story keeps me reading and engaged in the story!
It definitely holds my interest and I am eager to read more.
The story flows for me and I look forward to the next chapter! Thank you...........harmony13

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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Comment from Belinda
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Hi, I like the scene. The doctor is right. This family can turn anything into a delightful event. I like the close up picture of the Indian Blanket, too.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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Comment from Anisa-
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Another great chapter. Glad to see Anna is able to finally leave the hospital. I didn't notice any spag errors or anything that seemed to trip me up.

Anisa

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2012


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