Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The young cannot grasp the old ways. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. The suspense factor is building.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Thanks for that latter insight, charlie. It's good to know I hit the mark. I really appreciate your support and generosity.

Warmest regards, Bev

reply by c_lucas on 29-Apr-2013

You're welcome, Bev. Charlie

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Wouldn't it be lovely to live someplace secluded for. The rest of the world. I can smell the smoke from the fireplace now. Mmmmm. I love the description of the deer encounter. I love nature. This mystery keeps getting more interesting. How do you pronounce, "Uncivil"?

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Hi, Joy. I'm very fortunate to live close to nature. We have deer and turkey running out in front of us all the time.

The pronounciation for Unci, Uhn-see.

Thanks for the great review and your deeply valued support, my friend.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very wel lwritten writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where jana and rick go to interview jana's uncle and learns more about indian customs. he says it was a manifestation of the evil within the murderer that he saw beside the victim. i enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Thank you so very much, sweetwoodjax. I am very appreciative of your support and insights. Warmest regards, Bev

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

partner, Detective Jana Burke navigated the approach to her uncle's home. (comma after Burke I think).

Great chapter. I,too, learned Indian time when I worked on a reservation for a while.

Enjoyable, my friend~Debbie

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

My editor kicked out the comma. But like you, I think it belongs there. Thanks so much for the review, Debbie, I much appreciate the support!

Comment from MENNIPLOSS

Exceptional

Marvellous chapter, your escriutura is one of my favorite. A lot of congratulations for sharing with us this very agreeable writing and of a great quality. Sending a strong embrace, regards dear friend and one admires you very much!
menni

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013

Dear menni, thank you so very much for this wonderful review! It's really nice to hear from you again. I appreciate your kindness and generosity. Blessings, Bev