Comment from paulinedr

Excellent

Delightful. The building of tension is meticulous, moment by moment. All the time I am reading, the image of an abused woman being pushed to the edge, leads me to hope for a method to protect her from the consequences of her dreaded but necessary actions. The ending a wonderful release. Great writing.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013

Thanks so much Paulie for a fun review of this one.

Comment from Taffspride

Excellent

ROFL.. you really had me fooled on this one.as I read it, I was imagining all kinds of horrors that had been inflicted on this poor girl.

Then when I read your closing lines, Yes I let out such a screech of laughter, DH came rushing in to see if all was OK. So I re-read the poem to him, not very well the second time, because I was trying not to laugh.

Great job girl.

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013

I'm laughing right now as I finished reading your review Ann. You are something else!!!

Comment from Betty Bleen

Excellent

I loved this piece! You really had me going there. I thought for sure it was a man you were going to kill. A boyfriend, husband, relative... I was NOT prepared for the ending.

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013

Thanks a lot Betty for this fun review. Sigh it was a killer, right?

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

starting of black and white the story in words like a spider his prey you drew a picture with a bang watch out the spider

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013

Heheh so many thanks Darkhorse for the great review of this one.