Comment from misscookie

Excellent

You did it again. this is a wonderful, interesting exciting chapter. and never a dull moment.
you had my attention from the first line to the last.
thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

Hi, misscookie. I so appreciate your gracious review! Thank you for the support and encouragement. Blessings, Bev

reply by misscookie on 13-Jun-2013

Your welcome, it was my pleasure

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Great chapter...was reading fast, may have missed some errors. Still can't keep my eyes off that beautiful art work of the snake, which I loath snakes.


"Three sets of prints. One animal, one human."
[There appeared three sets of prints: One animal and the other human.]

"Shut up, fool. Your reward is the honor of serving me. Let it not be said I don't keep my promises. I'm about to toss you a scrap." [lol love this line.]

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

I love that picture, too, obviously! Thanks for the great review, amahra. I apprecite your suggestions and support. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Oh I'm afraid I've fallen way behind in reading you girl. This was great in that it let the watcher know a few things but yet could do nothing about them. Sigh I feel so lost. LOL

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2013

Hi, Gungalo. I appreciate you taking time out to read this chapter. It's always a pleasure to hear from you and receive your support. Warmest regards, Bev