Inflection
Slow Dancing45 total reviews
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
You've invaded and personified (justly) my era this time. Dancing was cheek to cheek and romance was the main (only) theme. Emotional, and great reading (iambics) and a nice tribute to the era and the players. Kenny
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
You've invaded and personified (justly) my era this time. Dancing was cheek to cheek and romance was the main (only) theme. Emotional, and great reading (iambics) and a nice tribute to the era and the players. Kenny
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Kenny. Honestly, I never would have guessed that it was your era, my friend, but I'm unbelievably flattered that you felt I did it justice. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Acquired Taste
I simply love this. Very vivid, poignant and filled with emotions that so many of us may feel yet cannot express.
Just really enjoyed reading this - several times!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
I simply love this. Very vivid, poignant and filled with emotions that so many of us may feel yet cannot express.
Just really enjoyed reading this - several times!
AT=/
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, AT, for the sixer, and for your wonderful review. I appreciate it, and I appreciate YOU. So...are you working on a poem for Friday? ;-)
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not yet - desperately trying to finish my second book which certainly doesn't lend itself to frivolity at any level. Am hopeful something crosses my beleaguered mind.
I really like the poem - it is just wonderful.
AT=/
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Thank you, my friend. It'll come to you. :-)
Comment from Rondeno
So much, so densely-woven ... immaculate versification (this is a "given" with you!) and a brilliant evocation of those divine moments when the song, the girl and the mood are all just right ... and Mr. Porter and Mr. Sinatra are up there in the League of Superheroes!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
So much, so densely-woven ... immaculate versification (this is a "given" with you!) and a brilliant evocation of those divine moments when the song, the girl and the mood are all just right ... and Mr. Porter and Mr. Sinatra are up there in the League of Superheroes!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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My friend, that means so much to me, coming from a master poetic storyteller! I really appreciate it. The sixer, the kind words, and the review are such wonderful validation, Mike. Thank you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, marillion, I love those songs and love the old movies with doris day and fred Astaire. I loved the movie no no Nanette with the great music and acting.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
this is very well written, marillion, I love those songs and love the old movies with doris day and fred Astaire. I loved the movie no no Nanette with the great music and acting.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thanks very much, swj. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from 24chas
Well, sir, you've earned my first sixer of the week, and I have no qualms about giving it to you. This is an amazing piece of poetry, Mar, and I love the Chairman, so here you go. So well done. Really.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
Well, sir, you've earned my first sixer of the week, and I have no qualms about giving it to you. This is an amazing piece of poetry, Mar, and I love the Chairman, so here you go. So well done. Really.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, Chas, for the sixer and the great review. I appreciate it.