Short Form Poetry
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Comment from c_lucas
The changing of the colors is something not to be missed or ignored. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your conduct.
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The changing of the colors is something not to be missed or ignored. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your conduct.
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from judester
I like the clever personification here. The old leaves remembering when they were fresh, young buds. Good luck with the contest, cheers Judester
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I like the clever personification here. The old leaves remembering when they were fresh, young buds. Good luck with the contest, cheers Judester
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from NicciFaye
Now that is a winning poem. I love the leaves floating on sighs remembering springs...excellent metaphoric visual. A gem of a poem. Many blessings in this contest.
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Now that is a winning poem. I love the leaves floating on sighs remembering springs...excellent metaphoric visual. A gem of a poem. Many blessings in this contest.
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Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from akulkumol
Beautiful poem describing the beauty of autumn. When the falling leaves fly along with the wind a sense of happiness engulfs the mind and spirit. Loved reading it and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest.
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Beautiful poem describing the beauty of autumn. When the falling leaves fly along with the wind a sense of happiness engulfs the mind and spirit. Loved reading it and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest.
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Comment Written 07-May-2014