Writings From the Heart
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, deepwater, excellent imagery of the memories that will always remain of the first love, even when that first love is lost to you. I enjoyed reading it.
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this is very well written, deepwater, excellent imagery of the memories that will always remain of the first love, even when that first love is lost to you. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment from Sanku
Promises to stay always mostly remain as promises.life would have changed both .so it is possible that if they met again they may not even recognize each other!.A sweet nostalgic poem.
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Promises to stay always mostly remain as promises.life would have changed both .so it is possible that if they met again they may not even recognize each other!.A sweet nostalgic poem.
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Comment from persevere
This is a warm nostalgic piece. There is such an innocence in that first awkward kiss and that feeling of 'never to part'. I guess this first love is a necessary learning experience.
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This is a warm nostalgic piece. There is such an innocence in that first awkward kiss and that feeling of 'never to part'. I guess this first love is a necessary learning experience.
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Comment from MisinformedPoet
Such a sweet and dreamy poem of yearning back to a first love and wondering if they remembered it too and accompanied by a very apt and cute picture.
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Such a sweet and dreamy poem of yearning back to a first love and wondering if they remembered it too and accompanied by a very apt and cute picture.
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Comment from Dibul
It's a beautiful poem about the sweet memories of that first love, the first kiss, and all the lovely things. Very nicely written. I like the questions that you've asked in the poem. Good one this.
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It's a beautiful poem about the sweet memories of that first love, the first kiss, and all the lovely things. Very nicely written. I like the questions that you've asked in the poem. Good one this.
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Comment from Bobby Jo
awh, the days of a summer love. Beauty in the night of the stars. First kiss by the light of the fireflies, Yes I remember, the innocent of young hearts beat wildly. If only we could go back.
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awh, the days of a summer love. Beauty in the night of the stars. First kiss by the light of the fireflies, Yes I remember, the innocent of young hearts beat wildly. If only we could go back.
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Thanks for the review Bobby Jo
Comment from TAB_that's me
ah the memories of our first loves and summertime and awkward kisses - brings back lots of memories. Great read.
~~teresa~~
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ah the memories of our first loves and summertime and awkward kisses - brings back lots of memories. Great read.
~~teresa~~
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thank you Teresa
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well=written poem and I think more than just fun. It has a powerful message about how an event can permanently change a life. Again, I like ending with the question. Good write, my friend~Debbie
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This is a well=written poem and I think more than just fun. It has a powerful message about how an event can permanently change a life. Again, I like ending with the question. Good write, my friend~Debbie
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thank you Debble
Comment from Bill Schott
It's interesting to imagine whether the actions of our youth, as far as girls and boys puppy loves, still resonate later on in people's lives. The is both humorous and sad.
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It's interesting to imagine whether the actions of our youth, as far as girls and boys puppy loves, still resonate later on in people's lives. The is both humorous and sad.
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thank you for your review
Comment from Zinnia48
Beautiful memories told with beautiful words! I like that you began and ended with a question? The first one leads me into the poem. the last one allows the poem to continue for as long as I care to muse about my own loves/my own memories triggered by yours. thanks! caroline
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Beautiful memories told with beautiful words! I like that you began and ended with a question? The first one leads me into the poem. the last one allows the poem to continue for as long as I care to muse about my own loves/my own memories triggered by yours. thanks! caroline
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thank you for this and your memories