Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Do you hold the power of gods "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from CHIGYSISKI
DEEP WORDS THAT PROVOKE SOME THOUGHT.THE RHYME IS EXCELLENT.THE IMAGERY GREAT.I THINK I LIKE THE LAST TWO LINES BEST OF ALL.WHAT IS A WOMAN'S STATUS IN OUR WORLD TODAY AND TRULY CAN MAN PROTECT HIS CHILD IN THE WORLD WE LIVE IN TODAY? GREAT JOB!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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DEEP WORDS THAT PROVOKE SOME THOUGHT.THE RHYME IS EXCELLENT.THE IMAGERY GREAT.I THINK I LIKE THE LAST TWO LINES BEST OF ALL.WHAT IS A WOMAN'S STATUS IN OUR WORLD TODAY AND TRULY CAN MAN PROTECT HIS CHILD IN THE WORLD WE LIVE IN TODAY? GREAT JOB!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from Oatmeal
gw,
I enjoyed this poem very much. Reading it was a pleasure. The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out. All arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.
The piece was clean. No SPAG or typos to be seen.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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gw,
I enjoyed this poem very much. Reading it was a pleasure. The flow was smooth. The theme well thought out. All arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.
The piece was clean. No SPAG or typos to be seen.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Oatmeal
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is beautiful, I love the picture too. I feel we don't know our own worth. We need to stop and see what is worth living for. Great work.
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This is beautiful, I love the picture too. I feel we don't know our own worth. We need to stop and see what is worth living for. Great work.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you again Bobby Jo
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
No but in His image we are created & man has made of him/herself worth about a shekel, maybe a shekel & a half, only the Good Lord knows, how dare Him, for sure & yet, He loves us unconditionally. How dare He when so many wait for outer-space aliens to save them when Jesus has already come & shown the way of salvation.
I found this to be a difficult poem unsure what side is which, kind of confusing? Rhymes, no spelling or grammatical errors that I could see.
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No but in His image we are created & man has made of him/herself worth about a shekel, maybe a shekel & a half, only the Good Lord knows, how dare Him, for sure & yet, He loves us unconditionally. How dare He when so many wait for outer-space aliens to save them when Jesus has already come & shown the way of salvation.
I found this to be a difficult poem unsure what side is which, kind of confusing? Rhymes, no spelling or grammatical errors that I could see.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thanks
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
OK ..... here it is-Very nice metaphysical poem. Good photography choice also. Very well written. Great job, keep writing!! Nice!
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OK ..... here it is-Very nice metaphysical poem. Good photography choice also. Very well written. Great job, keep writing!! Nice!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from mjac777
Thought provoking poem, deepwater. (still waters run deep?)
Just how would we be perceived if an alien race were to land on earth.
The questions you posit make us all sit up and wonder.
Are we caring, loving creatures?
Sadly, that is not the case in most instances.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thought provoking poem, deepwater. (still waters run deep?)
Just how would we be perceived if an alien race were to land on earth.
The questions you posit make us all sit up and wonder.
Are we caring, loving creatures?
Sadly, that is not the case in most instances.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from seaglass
From everything I see going on all over the world these days...Perhaps it is not a save place for angel to come, unless they can change things. Lovely rhyme in this poem, with thoughts to ponder.
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From everything I see going on all over the world these days...Perhaps it is not a save place for angel to come, unless they can change things. Lovely rhyme in this poem, with thoughts to ponder.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you seaglass
Comment from Charlene0513
To deepwater,
We are living in a cosmos where everything is being turned into a devastating chaos. Worldly or materialistic values are killing us and man does not care or does little about it.
Charlene
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To deepwater,
We are living in a cosmos where everything is being turned into a devastating chaos. Worldly or materialistic values are killing us and man does not care or does little about it.
Charlene
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Charlene
Comment from ArtGal
I've been keeping up with your writing, and this one is truly outstanding. I wonder also what others from another galaxy might ask us, and probably very close to what you already said. The last two sentences where they ask about man and woman are more what we would expect. The others are quite exceptional. Bravo for this great poem, and I enjoyed. . .Sharon
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I've been keeping up with your writing, and this one is truly outstanding. I wonder also what others from another galaxy might ask us, and probably very close to what you already said. The last two sentences where they ask about man and woman are more what we would expect. The others are quite exceptional. Bravo for this great poem, and I enjoyed. . .Sharon
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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thank you Sharon for this review, I love to write not to good but hope to get there one day
thanks
Gary
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Gary, I think your writing is really excellent!
Comment from desire333
Ooh I do enjoy reading your work. I love how your words are so cohesive. And the artwork that you've chosen goes along really well. Thank you once again for sharing.
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Ooh I do enjoy reading your work. I love how your words are so cohesive. And the artwork that you've chosen goes along really well. Thank you once again for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
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thank you desire for this