Comment from mjac777

Excellent

Very erotic, well written love poem -
Great imagery and feeling without being too graphic.
You can feel the passion on every line - I liked the romantic desert theme - original!
Best of luck with new book -
Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Sensual and Passionate, yet innocent. My favorite kind of poem. Your poem is very well written and full of emotion. Very good job of writing.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you for this Barbara

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

Wild fires in Love "love upon desert sands" A good love poem you have crafted here. 'What more can be to making love upon desert sands.' Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from Titan Black

Excellent

Damn! You make me want to go fall
in love within the dessert sands. Your
poetic alliteration was amazing. You
just let the words flow right into
the air. You must have women falling
head over heels over this one. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Titan

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I didn't know desert sands would be so compelling............
You make it sound so any way....legs of silk cling as bodies intertwine....
Where can I get those.....?
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thanks jenny

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, deepwater, great imagery about love under a desert moon is beautiful, the picture is gorgeous and pairs well with your poem. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Jax

Comment from sawyers49

Excellent

I enjoyed this piece and the words are very descriptive it all comes a live
I love the beautiful artwork you choose to go with your work.Thank you for sharing :)

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank tou

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

Another pretty good piece of work you have given us here. I feel that the war and romance genres are your forte mate ! Keep it up !

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

thanks James

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

this is such a passionate piece of poetic art! the imagery is delightful yet breath-taking! very well-penned dear friend!
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

rebekka thank you for this

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Gary

I love how this takes the reader to another place in time with the great artwork you chose, which compliments your great poem.

Nicely done.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

thank you Jax