2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (money tree in spring)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Dean Kuch
I've never heard of one of these gorgeous little trees, Gypsy, but it sounds like it would be right up my alley. My thumb is about as green as gasoline--not very!--and every plant I try to grow seems to die. perhaps it's just the host doing the planting.
If it's easy to care for, then that's the tree for me. I'm going to try and find one. They're so cool looking!
Thanks for the info, and for sharing this with us all.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
I've never heard of one of these gorgeous little trees, Gypsy, but it sounds like it would be right up my alley. My thumb is about as green as gasoline--not very!--and every plant I try to grow seems to die. perhaps it's just the host doing the planting.
If it's easy to care for, then that's the tree for me. I'm going to try and find one. They're so cool looking!
Thanks for the info, and for sharing this with us all.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Dean, I appreciate your review. This kind of plants bring good luck and they are easy to grow, even for someone with gasoline thumbs LOL
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I'm going to give one a go. I can't do any worse than I already have, lol. :)
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Dean, you want to hear something funny. When I wrote the haiku this morning, I was looking at my money tree (is a plant) and it leans to the right. Now people think it is a political statement. LOL
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Well, I have to admit, I almost did too. I think it's because you used the word "money", coupled with a phrase about leaning toward the right, or conservative side. Then I realized you were simply making an observation, and not trying to make a statement.
~Dean ;)
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I am glad you got it.
Comment from seaglass
I use to have a money tree... it died, just as my luck with money. Lol. Your poem describe and paints a picture of the care of these interesting plants.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
I use to have a money tree... it died, just as my luck with money. Lol. Your poem describe and paints a picture of the care of these interesting plants.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you seaglass, I appreciate your review
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line had the reader look more closely at the money tree. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. Thanks for the author's notes!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Excellent Poem! The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line had the reader look more closely at the money tree. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. Thanks for the author's notes!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you harmony, I appreciate your review
Comment from Clover77
I liked how you put the care for the plant in the author's notes, it really helped understand what a money tree was, and the poem was beautiful; well done
~Julia
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
I liked how you put the care for the plant in the author's notes, it really helped understand what a money tree was, and the poem was beautiful; well done
~Julia
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Julia, I appreicate your review
Comment from Pantygynt
I've a money tree
But it does not look like yours
Mine's in pounds sterling
I just wonder why
There should be this difference
Mine has fleshy leaves
What is the reason
Your leaves are a lighter green
Is yours in dollars
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
I've a money tree
But it does not look like yours
Mine's in pounds sterling
I just wonder why
There should be this difference
Mine has fleshy leaves
What is the reason
Your leaves are a lighter green
Is yours in dollars
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you pantygynt, I appreciate your review
Comment from GregoryCody
This is lovely. I also enjoyed your notes. This could have deeper meanings, makes the reader think. Why was it leaning yo the right? Was it a play on words? Have you thought of losing the smaller connecting words like; to and the? It allows you to add more but also, each word, since there are so few, have to really punch.
Like
timid plant grows right
Just a thought! :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
This is lovely. I also enjoyed your notes. This could have deeper meanings, makes the reader think. Why was it leaning yo the right? Was it a play on words? Have you thought of losing the smaller connecting words like; to and the? It allows you to add more but also, each word, since there are so few, have to really punch.
Like
timid plant grows right
Just a thought! :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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I have the money try plant in my living room and it grows to the right from where I was looking at it this morning. It is just an observation. Thank you Cody
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I LOVE it
Comment from Ben Colder
I learn something every day. I have heard of a money tree and always wanted to find one and now behold it is before me. For real, it is call a money tree? Appreciate you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
I learn something every day. I have heard of a money tree and always wanted to find one and now behold it is before me. For real, it is call a money tree? Appreciate you.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Yeah, it is called the money tree and some folks believe if you rub the leaves it brings good luck and money :)
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wow!
Comment from Sam Bates
Nice little poem... I wish money did grow on trees...I would certainly grow one and be very diligent about its care. I hope yours is leaning only because it enjoys the sunshine..not because its a little under the weather........Thank for sharing..enjoy your day! Sam
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Nice little poem... I wish money did grow on trees...I would certainly grow one and be very diligent about its care. I hope yours is leaning only because it enjoys the sunshine..not because its a little under the weather........Thank for sharing..enjoy your day! Sam
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Sam. Yes, my tree leans because the sunlight calls his name.
Comment from lakeport
Money tree in spring, indeed that's a very nice Haiku poem, looks like a beautiful tree, thanks for the instruction, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs! lakeport.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Money tree in spring, indeed that's a very nice Haiku poem, looks like a beautiful tree, thanks for the instruction, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs! lakeport.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you lakeport, you are very kind.
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you are very welcome.Hugs! Lakeport.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi again Gypsy Blue Rose from Madrid. Your words and color scheme format definitely brought life to the picture. I have to disagree that the money tree is easy to grow only cause I lack the green thumb heh heh.. I love the direction though on "leaning to the right." It's a positive message that sends subliminal thoughts to focus on the root rather than the symptom of any problem. At least, that's my interpretation. Good luck with this little treasure of a Haiku. Your Fanstory friend..Ben and Hasta la proxima.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Hi again Gypsy Blue Rose from Madrid. Your words and color scheme format definitely brought life to the picture. I have to disagree that the money tree is easy to grow only cause I lack the green thumb heh heh.. I love the direction though on "leaning to the right." It's a positive message that sends subliminal thoughts to focus on the root rather than the symptom of any problem. At least, that's my interpretation. Good luck with this little treasure of a Haiku. Your Fanstory friend..Ben and Hasta la proxima.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Hola Benjamin, que alegria de verte por aqui. I hope you know what I am saying. LOL How is the weather on your part of the world? We have we have nice weather all this week, it has cooled off.
Thank you Benjamin, you are very kind.
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Hey, I'm excited to so you here on this site too heh heh...Claudo, entiendo bien pero no tengo nadien para practicar me espanol aqui..heh heh..I hope you can understand my Texas Spanish.. Weather here is good, its getting hot though. Thanks for your comment to. I always say I'm kind, but not to be confused with weakness. heh heh. And your talented. Have a great weekend. Hasta luego.