Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Another fun story of Jerry Jing-Jang and the Bears. Very nice rhyme and good use of alliteration for a smooth read.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. So glad you enjoyed JJJ's latest adventure.

Comment from poetsteve15

Exceptional

I loved it... What a great story and poem. It kept me into all the way to end of it. I could see cowboy putting this to a song at some campfire some cool night. Very good job. That is why the six stars.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks! I'm thrilled you could see a cowboy putting it to song. Thanks again for the six and this wonderful review.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This was a very pleasing story. Though some blood thirsty cowpokes would have killed the cub and his ma. This compassionate cowboy did not blame the bears for being bears and doing what bears do. I am quite sure that he will be rewarded for his restraint.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. JJJ is one of the good guys. He doesn't shoot unless he has to. He's a fun character to write.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A fantastic write great humour infused into this, loved the rhyme which added to the overall skill of this piece, also the use of voices was excellently pulled off, overall a fab and funny write that was delightful to read.Enjoyed .Meia :)

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. Jerry Jing-Jang's adventures are always fun to write. His lingo almost writes itslef sometimes. Glad you had fun with it.

Comment from William Ross

Exceptional

very good i think this as ia well written tale of Jerry Jing-Jang great rhyming and rhythm, flows and reads really well, i like it a lot. Thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks for the six! JJJ is always fun. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Very cute. Great rhyme and meter. Love it. I can just picture the little bears munching on his food. I love your Jerry Jing-jang poems/stories. Thanks for the smiles. :)

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. JJJ is a lot of fun to write. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from kriver

Exceptional

Hi,
I really enjoyed your cowboy story poem.
It made me think of my Dad, Mom, and sister in the 1930's in a Model A Ford coupe in
Yellowstone park. My Dad wanted a picture of this bear but he was in the shade eating berries. My Dad went and gave him a shove
to get him in the light. The bear didn't like that so he chased my Dad around the car because my Mom had locked the doors and wouldn't let him in. Eventually she did or I wouldn't be here. This really did happen.
Best regards,
K River

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks for the six! I love your story. Bears are unpredictable. You could turn it into a poem.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Great ! loved it. Pesky bears and all the while they are just trying to get away and have meal for the day. Poor dog and JJJ. Great Job - Sarah

It took some time with cattle do drive - did you mean do or to here, I saw this, I just wanted to let you know to change it or leave it how you see it best.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks I'll have to take another look at that line. Perhaps it's not clear th the reader. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by Sherman541 on 06-Jan-2017

you are welcome and I did enjoy, very much so - Sarah

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Cindy, I enjoyed reading this story poem about Jerry Jing-Jang
and the bears. I think you did a great job on it. It gave me
a smile. I think it's the 6th paragraph .. it took some time with
cattle (to) drive instead of do. Very nice though.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. I'm going to fix that line right now.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

II love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
The back ground colors is out of sight
You captured my attention from the start
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

reply by misscookie on 07-Jan-2017

You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie