Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is a wonderfully crafted poem in perfect iambic metre and incredible rhymes. That is the undeniable fact. That said, I am curious to see if those who disagree with your POV will be able to rate on the indisputable top quality of your poem even if they ixnay the content. I would be terribly disappointed to learn otherwise. There are some great lines in your political satire and I really love the word cacafuego. It flows beautifully and your entire presentation is most tasteful. And of course I am in full agreement.

Ay matey and great job friend Craig. :) See? I can talk like a pirate too if the need to do so is present.

Gloria

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

You know why pirates are so scary, Gloria? Because they "argggggh"!

OK, I'll stick to my day job.

Many thanks for the lovely assessment. I'm not too concerned. I don't get a lot of nasty comments, believe it or not, even though I might occasionally push the boundaries a bit with certain groups lol

And if people want to have a rant, who am I to stop them?

Cheers,
Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

I absolutely love this! Such flatulent humor for a flatulent man. You are brave to post this here. There are some trump worshippers out there. But, I found your poem satirical and humorous. Thank you for sharing and best of luck with this poem. Thank you for describing this crass ass to the T.

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Trump? Who said anything about Trump? ;-)

Thanks for the great review, I'm sure I'll get some not-so-complementary ones - oh, well, c'est la vie.

Much appreciated,
Craig

reply by Pamusart on 01-Mar-2018

We must continue the resistance. My husband did not risk his life as a freedom fighter working for the Reverend Dr. Martin Luther king 53 years ago to see this country go backwards under white nationalist rule.

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem indeed. I really enjoyed this poem very much. The picture you posted is perfect for this poem. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thanks very much for the kind words - they are greatly appreciated - Craig