What Say You?
Antonym Poem Contest48 total reviews
Comment from Mistydawn
I don't know how many shows I've seen where the person claims their innocence, almost having you believing it too until the shocking end. The poem is well-written, your great word choice sums up most court shows nicely. Your picture is perfect. Good luck with your contest.
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I don't know how many shows I've seen where the person claims their innocence, almost having you believing it too until the shocking end. The poem is well-written, your great word choice sums up most court shows nicely. Your picture is perfect. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank, Dawn!
Comment from TPAC
Yeah, facts stated too often, learning jurors eager to end serving duties of jury, them to compromise others rights to flee its task. I found this write an alert to those whom venture into the courts. Nicely said in my opinion. Maybe, too nice.
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Yeah, facts stated too often, learning jurors eager to end serving duties of jury, them to compromise others rights to flee its task. I found this write an alert to those whom venture into the courts. Nicely said in my opinion. Maybe, too nice.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you, TPAC.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is difference in theory and practice as knowledge and wisdom or truth and falsity; you proclaim yourself innocent but jury sentences you a guilty; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
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There is difference in theory and practice as knowledge and wisdom or truth and falsity; you proclaim yourself innocent but jury sentences you a guilty; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-May-2019
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Thanks!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written antonym poem about the innocent plea, makes it up to the otherside to prove you are guilty of the accusations they made, no worries if you are really innocent.
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A very well-written antonym poem about the innocent plea, makes it up to the otherside to prove you are guilty of the accusations they made, no worries if you are really innocent.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
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Thanks!
Comment from Sally Law
A great entry for this last minute contest. Love the classic photo and your chosen subject matter. Looks guilty to me, unfortunately for him.
Always my best,
Sal :+)
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A great entry for this last minute contest. Love the classic photo and your chosen subject matter. Looks guilty to me, unfortunately for him.
Always my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you, Sal!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the image and
presentation.
-The antonyms are good.
-Good descriptive detail
about how things are
viewed by the lawyer
and/or the client.
-Worry is not a good sign,
as well what the jury's eyes reflect:
"Guilty!" Definitely not a good
outcome, but a good conclusion
for your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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-I like the image and
presentation.
-The antonyms are good.
-Good descriptive detail
about how things are
viewed by the lawyer
and/or the client.
-Worry is not a good sign,
as well what the jury's eyes reflect:
"Guilty!" Definitely not a good
outcome, but a good conclusion
for your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very powerful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I also like the black and white picture as it made the poem seem very retro. The words suited the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is a very powerful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I also like the black and white picture as it made the poem seem very retro. The words suited the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-May-2019
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Thanks, dmt!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent antonym poem with good choice of the two words
It's heart of many suspense movies and sometimes in real life as well.
It may depend upon ones so called peers.
Excellent picture to match your poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is an excellent antonym poem with good choice of the two words
It's heart of many suspense movies and sometimes in real life as well.
It may depend upon ones so called peers.
Excellent picture to match your poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you, Robert!