Free Verse Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Beyond the Wit of Daylight Hours"A collection of free verse poems
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a cleansing of oneself in these words, we have been in dark places, but do not allow those places to thwart a brand new day that offers that renewal we seek in life, the chance to start again and experience new things without letting the ghostly past shadow our dreams, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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There is a cleansing of oneself in these words, we have been in dark places, but do not allow those places to thwart a brand new day that offers that renewal we seek in life, the chance to start again and experience new things without letting the ghostly past shadow our dreams, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Dolly. Thank you for your observations and kind words. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am in awe of this poem. I knew you were great a pose but you are also equally as good at writing poetry. I cannot write poetry to save my soul. Thank you for sharing.
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I am in awe of this poem. I knew you were great a pose but you are also equally as good at writing poetry. I cannot write poetry to save my soul. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Barbara. Thank you for your kind words and for the six stars. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from royowen
What fleeting ghost ship in time are we Tony. Nothing permanent, nothing that lasts and escapes this malaise of life. You've captured the heart of the sad but worthwhile moments in life, as it wends it's weary way to mortality, well done Tony, blessings, Roy
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What fleeting ghost ship in time are we Tony. Nothing permanent, nothing that lasts and escapes this malaise of life. You've captured the heart of the sad but worthwhile moments in life, as it wends it's weary way to mortality, well done Tony, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Roy. Thank you for your observations and kind words. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned Free Verse, my friend. It reads lyrically even without a regular meter to assist it. The imagery is serene and paints wonderful pictures in the reader's imagination. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a beautifully penned Free Verse, my friend. It reads lyrically even without a regular meter to assist it. The imagery is serene and paints wonderful pictures in the reader's imagination. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Monica. Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I enjoyed reading this piece of free verse poetry. Your ideas and the words that express them are intriguing. It reminds me that there is much going on at the subconscious level. Keep sharing.
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I enjoyed reading this piece of free verse poetry. Your ideas and the words that express them are intriguing. It reminds me that there is much going on at the subconscious level. Keep sharing.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Susan. Thank you for your observations and kind words. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.