Life Ranching
Ranching is a cyclic business50 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is vividly descriptive, conveying a message about the hard but rewarding work on a cattle ranch. The words in lines 1-4 alliterate and all end with "ing," but they do not rhyme.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Your poem is vividly descriptive, conveying a message about the hard but rewarding work on a cattle ranch. The words in lines 1-4 alliterate and all end with "ing," but they do not rhyme.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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SALVAGED, thanks
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Rating changed to 5! :-)
Comment from Margaret Bednar
A poem that reminds me of 4-H days. I had horses, but I had many friends who had cows and I always thought it funny to see them grooming their cows. Sweet Tyburn poem for the contest entry.
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A poem that reminds me of 4-H days. I had horses, but I had many friends who had cows and I always thought it funny to see them grooming their cows. Sweet Tyburn poem for the contest entry.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Margaret thanks!~
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
I so appreciate the premise and idea behind your Tyburn poem; however,
your chosen words do not rhyme. Thus, your poem will be disqualified.
Plenty of time to edit!
Please let me know when you have edited!
Best Wishes!
diane
Hello Again, Mystery Writer!
Caught in time! Hooray!
And what a fine, well-crafted Tyburn you now have!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
I so appreciate the premise and idea behind your Tyburn poem; however,
your chosen words do not rhyme. Thus, your poem will be disqualified.
Plenty of time to edit!
Please let me know when you have edited!
Best Wishes!
diane
Hello Again, Mystery Writer!
Caught in time! Hooray!
And what a fine, well-crafted Tyburn you now have!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Correct and corrected thanks Diane
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Whoops, Mystery Writer!
Just re-read again, and you need to edit the last line for the proper formatting.
Easy fix, but you'll see what I mean...
Best Wishes,
diane
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The last line still does not conform to the requirements of the Tyburn.
I hope you see this message and make the required edit.
Take Care,
diane
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
That ranching is a cyclic business for live stocks with the practice of jobs in series; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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That ranching is a cyclic business for live stocks with the practice of jobs in series; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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thank you
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive, interesting and creative.
I pondered on the tasks of ranching. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive, interesting and creative.
I pondered on the tasks of ranching. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you
Comment from roof35
You have followed the rules and penned an excellent "Tyburn" entry. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for the words that follow. This is nicely done.
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You have followed the rules and penned an excellent "Tyburn" entry. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for the words that follow. This is nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Roof thanks!
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
That's a difficult style of poetry and you did really great to stick to the rules. Your poem was very descriptive and the picture you chose for it was perfect too. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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That's a difficult style of poetry and you did really great to stick to the rules. Your poem was very descriptive and the picture you chose for it was perfect too. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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sixftlion thank you so much!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun poem that fits the contest's syllabic count - good job there! ;) The contest requirements, however, are that the first four lines must rhyme... :( Life in the country is grand (but busy)!! Would be happy to re-review if you decide to correct... thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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A fun poem that fits the contest's syllabic count - good job there! ;) The contest requirements, however, are that the first four lines must rhyme... :( Life in the country is grand (but busy)!! Would be happy to re-review if you decide to correct... thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Yvette, I made a small shange
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The first four lines still do not rhyme... ;(
Comment from Janet Foor
I really liked this tyburn poem and you did a beautiful job with the syllable count. I was trying to think of a different word for the second "roping". With so few words in a poem, one hates to use a word twice. But alas, I could not think of another word to fit.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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I really liked this tyburn poem and you did a beautiful job with the syllable count. I was trying to think of a different word for the second "roping". With so few words in a poem, one hates to use a word twice. But alas, I could not think of another word to fit.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Shoeing thanks
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhyming words are descriptive of ranch work. I really like your picture you paired with your entry, too.
Your last two lines are missing the end rhymes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhyming words are descriptive of ranch work. I really like your picture you paired with your entry, too.
Your last two lines are missing the end rhymes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Corrected thanks!~
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Great!