Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Reflecting"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck to you with this "25 Syllable Poem" entry. We see our reflections of the past through memories kept in our minds, bringing them back often to see how far we've grown. Best regards.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Best of luck to you with this "25 Syllable Poem" entry. We see our reflections of the past through memories kept in our minds, bringing them back often to see how far we've grown. Best regards.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Kermit, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from angel123
This is a wonderful poem, simply and straight to the point about seeing your reflection and reflecting on your past experiences. I enjoyed reading it and your message is wonderful with a powerful artwork choice which promotes your message. Best wishes!
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This is a wonderful poem, simply and straight to the point about seeing your reflection and reflecting on your past experiences. I enjoyed reading it and your message is wonderful with a powerful artwork choice which promotes your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
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angel, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Ben1
This is a nice poem that reminds me of the times I went fishing. And reflecting on those memories. I liked how you tied it in the end by using reflecting in both ways you can. I think your picture was perfect for this poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is a nice poem that reminds me of the times I went fishing. And reflecting on those memories. I liked how you tied it in the end by using reflecting in both ways you can. I think your picture was perfect for this poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Ben, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Reflecting", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
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"Reflecting", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Duchess, smiling back! have a great weekend.
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Dear Anon,
smiling back and sending hugs too!
the Duchess
I hope your weekend's wonderful.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those moments we look back on, our memories that bring us joy of times gone by that sometimes fill our hearts with sadness as time is now our enemy and slips away in mirrored reflections, I know those feelings, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Those moments we look back on, our memories that bring us joy of times gone by that sometimes fill our hearts with sadness as time is now our enemy and slips away in mirrored reflections, I know those feelings, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
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Dolly, thank you, have a splendid weekend.
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a very deep and philosophical Poem. Reflecting on days gone by isn't always a good thing. You followed the prompt and wrote exactly 25 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a very deep and philosophical Poem. Reflecting on days gone by isn't always a good thing. You followed the prompt and wrote exactly 25 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
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Earl, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I really like this poem and its idea of reflecting in front of a beautiful mountain and a clear river. I usually would just admire the scenery instead.
Well done.
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I really like this poem and its idea of reflecting in front of a beautiful mountain and a clear river. I usually would just admire the scenery instead.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
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Lisa, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Colin John
This is a very thought provoking 25 sylable poem and I could not think of a better place to stand to look back on things as long as their is no Bears in the vicinity. Kind regards Colin
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This is a very thought provoking 25 sylable poem and I could not think of a better place to stand to look back on things as long as their is no Bears in the vicinity. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
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Colin, true about the bears. thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from ameen786
Superb use of 25-syllables delivering a beautiful verse in simple down to earth vocabulary, yet so meaningful; picture perfect presentation; good luck!
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Superb use of 25-syllables delivering a beautiful verse in simple down to earth vocabulary, yet so meaningful; picture perfect presentation; good luck!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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ameen, I appreciate your time to review and comment on my poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is very nice poem about reflection - both your reflection in the water and reflection of bygone days. Your 5 lines spell volumes. I liked your descriptive imagery and visuals and your artistic presentation, photo and font.
This should do very well in the contest - good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This is very nice poem about reflection - both your reflection in the water and reflection of bygone days. Your 5 lines spell volumes. I liked your descriptive imagery and visuals and your artistic presentation, photo and font.
This should do very well in the contest - good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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EM, I value your time that you placed on reading and commenting on my poem. Thank you, have a splendid weekend.