OL No Name
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Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Willie a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your Share a story in a poem entry, it flowed quite nicely and the rhymes were on point. The story was humorous and you created good visuals with your words. good luck in the contest and have a great day!
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Hello Willie a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your Share a story in a poem entry, it flowed quite nicely and the rhymes were on point. The story was humorous and you created good visuals with your words. good luck in the contest and have a great day!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Willie,
That is a good fitting epithet for this man, but sad. It must of been a lonelly life and death. I would think it was partly his fault and the others fault that no one knew him. You can't know someone without asking questions. The first one should be "What is your name?". The last line is so true.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
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Willie,
That is a good fitting epithet for this man, but sad. It must of been a lonelly life and death. I would think it was partly his fault and the others fault that no one knew him. You can't know someone without asking questions. The first one should be "What is your name?". The last line is so true.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
He was your dad, no one knew the past and his name; none and nothing but God knew his name and his past; he never fought with anyone; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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He was your dad, no one knew the past and his name; none and nothing but God knew his name and his past; he never fought with anyone; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
Comment from Thatguypk
I can almost hear some gruff old country and western singer rattling this off somewhere in a saloon bar. It has that kind of musical ring to it. I really enjoy stories in rhyme, and this is a melancholy one about lonliness. Very enjoyable read.
PK
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I can almost hear some gruff old country and western singer rattling this off somewhere in a saloon bar. It has that kind of musical ring to it. I really enjoy stories in rhyme, and this is a melancholy one about lonliness. Very enjoyable read.
PK
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
This was an excellent entry into the Share a story in a poem contest. It rhymes, makes sense, and is cleverly written and entertaining. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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This was an excellent entry into the Share a story in a poem contest. It rhymes, makes sense, and is cleverly written and entertaining. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Appreciate your review and six stars, Fred.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A story in a poem that does sound very true. The mystery of someone like that permeates a small town. The sad part is that no one will ever know, what he was all about. It's a rather mythical tale.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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A story in a poem that does sound very true. The mystery of someone like that permeates a small town. The sad part is that no one will ever know, what he was all about. It's a rather mythical tale.
Ralf
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thanks for your review Ralf. Always good to hear from you. Thanks for the stars.
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Hope your hangin' in there.
Comment from palmart
Renegades are people that want to show their toughness and never represent any "weak"side, while that is definitively their "human" side. Your character is like a tough renegade that died as he lived: Alone. One singer said one: "Maybe in loneliness, there is no pain ". Mr. No Name may have found being alone what he was trying to avoid...
Artwork represents definitively a very tough person!
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Renegades are people that want to show their toughness and never represent any "weak"side, while that is definitively their "human" side. Your character is like a tough renegade that died as he lived: Alone. One singer said one: "Maybe in loneliness, there is no pain ". Mr. No Name may have found being alone what he was trying to avoid...
Artwork represents definitively a very tough person!
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you, for the review and stars. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You`re very welcome, Willie!
Have a great week!
Comment from Wendy G
Enjoyed this piece of writing, but found it sad also. it is well constructed, and thoughtful, and the character seems real. Many go through life very lonely and alone, even when they have names, so this was a poignant reminder to look out for others and show them care, even if it is not acknowledged.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Enjoyed this piece of writing, but found it sad also. it is well constructed, and thoughtful, and the character seems real. Many go through life very lonely and alone, even when they have names, so this was a poignant reminder to look out for others and show them care, even if it is not acknowledged.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
Thank you for the stars and review, glad you enjoyed my effort.