Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Christmas Story"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
78 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and
nice presentation, Sandra.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-An excellent poem for children
about that special night one
Christmas Eve.
-It flows well with effective
imagery and rhyme as Daddy
Mouse tells the story.
-I like all of the detail as Miss
Cow gets help from the angel
and the other animals.
-Each pitched in with things
they found to make the
manger comfortable.
-I like the part when
"a light shone around."
-A very good ending, and
an excellent entry for the contest.
-Thanks for sharing it and
this wonderful Christmas spirit.
-Good luck in the contest, my friend.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
-Lovely artwork and
nice presentation, Sandra.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-An excellent poem for children
about that special night one
Christmas Eve.
-It flows well with effective
imagery and rhyme as Daddy
Mouse tells the story.
-I like all of the detail as Miss
Cow gets help from the angel
and the other animals.
-Each pitched in with things
they found to make the
manger comfortable.
-I like the part when
"a light shone around."
-A very good ending, and
an excellent entry for the contest.
-Thanks for sharing it and
this wonderful Christmas spirit.
-Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Sorry I'm so late replying, Pam, I've been running around like a headless chicken trying to get our holiday paperwork sorted. This covid has really made life difficult in more ways than one!
Thank you so very much for this fabulous review and all the golden stars. I'm over the moon that you enjoyed my children's Christmas story. I'll have to write some more bringing back the whole gang. Thank you, my dear friend, you've made my day. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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No problem; you weren't late, just busy:) You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review. I know what you mean about being hectic; it seems the pre-holidays and holidays bring it on! Take care; I'm glad I made your day!!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Timmy and Tommy Mouse both smiled with joy
"Mice helped baby Jesus when he was a boy!"
This poem is beautiful and left me with a lovely warm glow inside! This is a wonderful poem for any child or child at heart well done and good luck in the competition kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
Timmy and Tommy Mouse both smiled with joy
"Mice helped baby Jesus when he was a boy!"
This poem is beautiful and left me with a lovely warm glow inside! This is a wonderful poem for any child or child at heart well done and good luck in the competition kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from dragonpoet
Sandra,
This is a wonderfully done Christmas story about how the animals in the stable helped to make the bed. It tells of the birth of Jesus and what led up to it. It is a good addition to your Hedge Row writings.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck and Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
Sandra,
This is a wonderfully done Christmas story about how the animals in the stable helped to make the bed. It tells of the birth of Jesus and what led up to it. It is a good addition to your Hedge Row writings.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck and Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Aw, thank you, Joan. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one. I know you've read some of my other Hedgerow poems. Thanks so much for the good luck wishes. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Don't mention it. It was a fun story.
Have a Happy Holiday season.
Joan
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well this is certainly a new look at a Christmas story, Sandra. Leave it up to you to come up with something new. This is an incredible account of what all the animals felt that special day so many years ago when our Christ Child was born. This is great dear. Love it. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
Well this is certainly a new look at a Christmas story, Sandra. Leave it up to you to come up with something new. This is an incredible account of what all the animals felt that special day so many years ago when our Christ Child was born. This is great dear. Love it. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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It was fun bringing back my Hedgerow crew. They are perfect for my children's Christmas poems. Thank you so very much for this fabulous review and the lovely golden sixth star! You're a gem, my dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra. xxx
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It was fun to see them back. I forgot to mention that. I was really pleased to see them again. 🧡
Comment from RGstar
Good luck with this. Fables are of my favorites to read, so this falls well into my lap.
I could read forever, such the child in me.
Lovely.
Have a good Sunday.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
Good luck with this. Fables are of my favorites to read, so this falls well into my lap.
I could read forever, such the child in me.
Lovely.
Have a good Sunday.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Hi RG, thank you so very much for reading my poem and the lovely review. It's nice to know you are like me and enjoy fables. We all have that inner child inside. Lol. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
This is wonderful! I love how everyone gave something for the Baby's arrival. Anyone would love this story, no matter their age. Great photos to go with the story.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
This is wonderful! I love how everyone gave something for the Baby's arrival. Anyone would love this story, no matter their age. Great photos to go with the story.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Aw, thank you so very much, my dearest SATP! I'm delighted you liked my Hedgerow boys Christmas story, and a special hug for the golden star. We must have a chat this week before I go on holiday! Oh, La Palma has been taken off our trip! Love you lots! :)) Sandra xxx
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I'm so relieved you won't be going near that place!
Comment from Terry Broxson
What a great entry for the contest, good luck. I am very impressed with the rhyming and story. Sometimes that is hard to do. You made it sound effortless, which I am sure it was not. Really good job!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
What a great entry for the contest, good luck. I am very impressed with the rhyming and story. Sometimes that is hard to do. You made it sound effortless, which I am sure it was not. Really good job!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Terry, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That is quite a compliment you've given me, and I really appreciate it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I absolutely loved this Christmas poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Is it okay if I share it with my 3 year old granddaughter? Charlotte would love it. Again thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
I absolutely loved this Christmas poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Is it okay if I share it with my 3 year old granddaughter? Charlotte would love it. Again thank you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and the golden sixth star, Barbara!! I really appreciate it. Please let me know if your granddaughter enjoyed it. That's a precious age. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Begin Again
How warm and touching, telling the Christmas Story through the simplicity of little micfe. Children will absolutely be enthralled by it as well as young at heart adults. If I ever get them all gathered in one spot, I will most definitely share it with them. It's perfect!
Sending my love and lots of hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
How warm and touching, telling the Christmas Story through the simplicity of little micfe. Children will absolutely be enthralled by it as well as young at heart adults. If I ever get them all gathered in one spot, I will most definitely share it with them. It's perfect!
Sending my love and lots of hugs, Carol
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Hi, Carol, thank you so much for this fabulous review, and for the golden sixth star! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I've been all over the place these last few days so I've a couple of your chapters to catch up on tomorrow. I hope you're okay? I think about you every day. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jasminium
Speechless..!! Just breathtaking form of poetry for this topic. Everything comes together really well- the words, style and images. I would love to read more of your work ..good luck and keep writing!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
Speechless..!! Just breathtaking form of poetry for this topic. Everything comes together really well- the words, style and images. I would love to read more of your work ..good luck and keep writing!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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What an amazing review! Thank you so very much, Jasminium. I'm delighted you enjoyed my Christmas poem. And sending you a big hug for the golden sixth star!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Warm hugs to you too ..:)