Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from Tellis
Poets of gravity
White grace airborne
Skiers.
This was my favorite passage and I enjoyed reading this excellent poem.
Tellis
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Poets of gravity
White grace airborne
Skiers.
This was my favorite passage and I enjoyed reading this excellent poem.
Tellis
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Tellis for liking my work!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written and a nice dedication to our olympic skiers that look like they were born to fly. they make it look so easy, but it is full of hard work and dedication
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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this is very well written and a nice dedication to our olympic skiers that look like they were born to fly. they make it look so easy, but it is full of hard work and dedication
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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And they are so cute also. Thank you for reviewing!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Your description of these Olympic daredevils in this rictameter is right on.
Your words are pure and simple which flows very well in this poem. The picture is absolutely perfect it really sets this poem in motion/
Great piece of writing.................regards,,,,jim
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Your description of these Olympic daredevils in this rictameter is right on.
Your words are pure and simple which flows very well in this poem. The picture is absolutely perfect it really sets this poem in motion/
Great piece of writing.................regards,,,,jim
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Jim for the great review, it means a lot to me to read your comments.
Comment from PoetSpirit
This is an awesome poem dedicated to the Olympic skiers, It is truly amazing what they do! Very well written and presented!
Best wishes, Emily
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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This is an awesome poem dedicated to the Olympic skiers, It is truly amazing what they do! Very well written and presented!
Best wishes, Emily
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Emily for appreciating this work on the skiers of the Olympi Games.
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You're very welcome,
Best wishes, Emily
Comment from Rama Rao
An excellent poem on sports.
This is a subject poet normally don't touch.
Beauty lies in the beholder's eye.
You saw the grace of the skiers as they go through their fantastic jumps.
You called them rightly poets of gravity.
When they're airborne they sure show amazing grace.
Your short poem said it all in a few lines.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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An excellent poem on sports.
This is a subject poet normally don't touch.
Beauty lies in the beholder's eye.
You saw the grace of the skiers as they go through their fantastic jumps.
You called them rightly poets of gravity.
When they're airborne they sure show amazing grace.
Your short poem said it all in a few lines.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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This is an awesome review. Thank you Ramarao.
Comment from jgirlie152
A really great tribute to our great Olympians, wherever they may come from. The artwork is so perfect you could hardly tell you weren't there with a camera. Excellent.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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A really great tribute to our great Olympians, wherever they may come from. The artwork is so perfect you could hardly tell you weren't there with a camera. Excellent.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Joan for liking my words and the art I selected.
Comment from Maria C.
Great form in your Rictameter poem and the perfect time for the content. They are amazing for sure and you captured the sentiment so well in the lines, "Arms emulating soaring wings," and "Poets of gravity." Great job. I'm envious.
Blessings,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Great form in your Rictameter poem and the perfect time for the content. They are amazing for sure and you captured the sentiment so well in the lines, "Arms emulating soaring wings," and "Poets of gravity." Great job. I'm envious.
Blessings,
Maria C.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you. I think this is a best example of living life to the highest.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
HOPING FOR SKILL APPRECIATION OLYMPIC GAMES!
I liked this Riktameter on Olympic Games in action. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts, nice structure and format capture, orderly imageries and clarified visuals, good poetic appreciation of aspiration. It was a pleasant sporting spirit read.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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HOPING FOR SKILL APPRECIATION OLYMPIC GAMES!
I liked this Riktameter on Olympic Games in action. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts, nice structure and format capture, orderly imageries and clarified visuals, good poetic appreciation of aspiration. It was a pleasant sporting spirit read.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Your review has a a music of its own, a like "appreciation of aspiration."
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow... very well done...
a great poem written when these atheletes compete and showcase themselves to the world, I've been watching evry night with an amazement at what some of these atheletes can do...
Great entry into the contest..
John
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Wow... very well done...
a great poem written when these atheletes compete and showcase themselves to the world, I've been watching evry night with an amazement at what some of these atheletes can do...
Great entry into the contest..
John
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you John for watching the Olympics, from where my inspiration to write this work xame from.
Comment from Fish
I didn't watch the Olympics this year but
maybe I'll catch it next year. Your poem
was nearly as exciting as anything I've
ever seen when watching that show.
Nice! fish
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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I didn't watch the Olympics this year but
maybe I'll catch it next year. Your poem
was nearly as exciting as anything I've
ever seen when watching that show.
Nice! fish
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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That's an awesome review! Thank yoy!