Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Part 3, Chapter 9"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from bookishfabler
Oh, so glad he had a chance to explain. I didn't see any nits or spags. Your writing is always so clean. Me, I almost always overlook something, even if I read my work over and over. I guess that is why I post, so others catch what I miss. Thanks for sharing another great chapter. Hope you are doing well. Happy Labor day
hugs book
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Oh, so glad he had a chance to explain. I didn't see any nits or spags. Your writing is always so clean. Me, I almost always overlook something, even if I read my work over and over. I guess that is why I post, so others catch what I miss. Thanks for sharing another great chapter. Hope you are doing well. Happy Labor day
hugs book
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Janie King
I'm glad they got that resolved but now we're into the big showdown, so to say, in the courtroom...this story in its own right makes me nervous because so many of the abusers get free and kill their mate before any police show up, it always seems to be too late. God bless.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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I'm glad they got that resolved but now we're into the big showdown, so to say, in the courtroom...this story in its own right makes me nervous because so many of the abusers get free and kill their mate before any police show up, it always seems to be too late. God bless.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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There will be some drama later on. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
I don't know if this is only my computer or not, but the formatting on this chapter, not your other chapters, made me have to hit the arrows at the bottom to read the sentence all the way across and then scroll back again, etc, etc.
Excellent dialogue - you are doing an excellent job of showing the development of this relationship :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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I don't know if this is only my computer or not, but the formatting on this chapter, not your other chapters, made me have to hit the arrows at the bottom to read the sentence all the way across and then scroll back again, etc, etc.
Excellent dialogue - you are doing an excellent job of showing the development of this relationship :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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I will check out the formatting. Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Thank heavens Troy explained who the blonde was and then said he wasn't seeing anyone. That is a glimmer of hope and I hope he tells Anna how he feels about her. Now she has to face Bobby in court and I know it will be hard for here...even devastating to say the least. Looks like she is welcomed back by her boss and co-worker...it's a good thing. I like this chapter, well I do all of them! Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Hi Barbara,
Thank heavens Troy explained who the blonde was and then said he wasn't seeing anyone. That is a glimmer of hope and I hope he tells Anna how he feels about her. Now she has to face Bobby in court and I know it will be hard for here...even devastating to say the least. Looks like she is welcomed back by her boss and co-worker...it's a good thing. I like this chapter, well I do all of them! Blessings, chey
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Barbara
great set up for Anna and Troy to make up, I am looking forward to Bobby's trial I can not wait for him and his mother to get their licks LOL another great and spag free chapter
Jenny
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Barbara
great set up for Anna and Troy to make up, I am looking forward to Bobby's trial I can not wait for him and his mother to get their licks LOL another great and spag free chapter
Jenny
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
Great job and like that you always add some extra tidbits to help the story moving. Just a few nits to look at. Great work.
good (to) be back
early meeting (that) morning?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Great job and like that you always add some extra tidbits to help the story moving. Just a few nits to look at. Great work.
good (to) be back
early meeting (that) morning?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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I have correct the left out to, but it needs to be this morning, because it is THIS morning that the meeting took place. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Another wonderful section to read. As usual I enjoyed where these characters have gone in the story.
Well written, flowed nice and your imagery always seems to make everything so real.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Another wonderful section to read. As usual I enjoyed where these characters have gone in the story.
Well written, flowed nice and your imagery always seems to make everything so real.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
Whew! I'm glad Anna asked Troy about tetanus. I cut myself once on rusty clippers and had to run to the ER for a tetanus shot. You ended the chapter on a suspensful note about the hearing. I enjoyed this read a lot. Thanks.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Hello, barbara.
Whew! I'm glad Anna asked Troy about tetanus. I cut myself once on rusty clippers and had to run to the ER for a tetanus shot. You ended the chapter on a suspensful note about the hearing. I enjoyed this read a lot. Thanks.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter, troy following anna to clear things up and then getting ready to face her husband the next day. how was your week at school?
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter, troy following anna to clear things up and then getting ready to face her husband the next day. how was your week at school?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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The beginning of a new school year is always exciting.
Comment from mumsyone
This is another good chapter; the story is moving right along.
door of her workplace. It's good (to) be back.
Anna went in (into) her office,
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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This is another good chapter; the story is moving right along.
door of her workplace. It's good (to) be back.
Anna went in (into) her office,
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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I have made the corrections. Thank you for catching them.