Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from robina1978
The thought Anna has here make it a worthwhile read. After a divorce-nasty or not -a Mum wonders if she can be Mum and Dad to her child. She is not completely over her fears yet. Trusts the substitute grandparents, but not sure about Troy yet. Is just too soon.
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The thought Anna has here make it a worthwhile read. After a divorce-nasty or not -a Mum wonders if she can be Mum and Dad to her child. She is not completely over her fears yet. Trusts the substitute grandparents, but not sure about Troy yet. Is just too soon.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is another great pert from your competent pen we have here old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid write here ma'am
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This is another great pert from your competent pen we have here old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid write here ma'am
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
Thia ia a good bridge, Barbara. It moves the story along and shows Anna is capable of making decisions on her own. She's taking the incipient romance with Troy slowly and cautiously. A wise path. :) Nancy
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Thia ia a good bridge, Barbara. It moves the story along and shows Anna is capable of making decisions on her own. She's taking the incipient romance with Troy slowly and cautiously. A wise path. :) Nancy
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Comment from gypsynet
a whiff of good air for a breather from heightened tones of pages before this... a time for self-reflection as well for anna who is struggling at thought of single parenthood.. but is troy really the right person.. can he also be abusive?.. great use of tender language, soft scenes and setting... nicely done!
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a whiff of good air for a breather from heightened tones of pages before this... a time for self-reflection as well for anna who is struggling at thought of single parenthood.. but is troy really the right person.. can he also be abusive?.. great use of tender language, soft scenes and setting... nicely done!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from smudge
This is a well written chapter that is easy to read. The prose and dialogue is well blended into an easy natural flow. A very professional book.
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This is a well written chapter that is easy to read. The prose and dialogue is well blended into an easy natural flow. A very professional book.
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Comment from purrfect tale
Good chapter. I liked how she said tummy ache instead of stomach ache. When my son was small I would often us the kid terminology out of habit when speaking to adults. Mother's just fall into that habit, I think.
Besides(,) they've already missed having Michael around."
See(,) no chains or bruises."
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Good chapter. I liked how she said tummy ache instead of stomach ache. When my son was small I would often us the kid terminology out of habit when speaking to adults. Mother's just fall into that habit, I think.
Besides(,) they've already missed having Michael around."
See(,) no chains or bruises."
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
continuing in the excellent story, I now find that I am waiting in limbo for the forthcoming finale, this is truly edge of the seat drama!
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continuing in the excellent story, I now find that I am waiting in limbo for the forthcoming finale, this is truly edge of the seat drama!
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Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting chapter. It does have necessary information for the story. I like the dialogue, and the characters are acting in a believable manner.
Barbara
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This is a very interesting chapter. It does have necessary information for the story. I like the dialogue, and the characters are acting in a believable manner.
Barbara
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Misrael
I have read some of this but not all of it but enough to understand a little of what is going on in the story. I hope toread more in the future and hope it is just as good.
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I have read some of this but not all of it but enough to understand a little of what is going on in the story. I hope toread more in the future and hope it is just as good.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
You really don't need a cliffhanger because I keep expecting bobby to jump out of the woodwork anyway.
"Look[,] your favorite story."
"See[,] no chains or bruises." My life's better without him.
Roberta
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You really don't need a cliffhanger because I keep expecting bobby to jump out of the woodwork anyway.
"Look[,] your favorite story."
"See[,] no chains or bruises." My life's better without him.
Roberta
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I have added those commas.