Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
You definitely know how to keep the tension going in your story.
Looks like that someone is trying their best to make Anaa have a nerves breakdown
It's got to end.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hello Barb,
You definitely know how to keep the tension going in your story.
Looks like that someone is trying their best to make Anaa have a nerves breakdown
It's got to end.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from J Patience
How harrowing to live this life of dreading the sound of a muffler! The truth is, I have done the same. It's creepy, although fortunately it wasn't as dire a situation as this. I can't help but feel that Troy will truly help her, but that maybe it won't be perfect for some hidden reason. Having Michael in the situation adds heightened anxiety about the situation. I enjoyed the last bit I read, and this one is great too. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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How harrowing to live this life of dreading the sound of a muffler! The truth is, I have done the same. It's creepy, although fortunately it wasn't as dire a situation as this. I can't help but feel that Troy will truly help her, but that maybe it won't be perfect for some hidden reason. Having Michael in the situation adds heightened anxiety about the situation. I enjoyed the last bit I read, and this one is great too. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. Now it's getting scary again...:) Imagine what Anna will do without Troy and his family to guard her. Now I understand better the world of an abused woman. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi, Barbara. Now it's getting scary again...:) Imagine what Anna will do without Troy and his family to guard her. Now I understand better the world of an abused woman. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good continuing chapter, Barbara. It would be a horrible feeling to think you were being stalked all the time. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
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Good continuing chapter, Barbara. It would be a horrible feeling to think you were being stalked all the time. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mr elis
One reads story like this once or twice-in under ground papers in small towns and big cities.Domestic violence occurring all over the world.It's something government can't handle as it wouldn't want to because,even government officials are envolved.the question is who can-really prevent such criminal act against females?
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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One reads story like this once or twice-in under ground papers in small towns and big cities.Domestic violence occurring all over the world.It's something government can't handle as it wouldn't want to because,even government officials are envolved.the question is who can-really prevent such criminal act against females?
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Only the females themselves and they have such low self esteems that they can't do it. I appreciate your kind review.
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Barbara you have my vote to be on the secting group.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Another excellent post, Barbara. Anna is being stalked and harrassed. Probably hired by Bobby's mother. Only one spot where the dialog is slightly awkward: Anna: "I never go or do anything" The rest is perfect, as always. :) Nancy
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Another excellent post, Barbara. Anna is being stalked and harrassed. Probably hired by Bobby's mother. Only one spot where the dialog is slightly awkward: Anna: "I never go or do anything" The rest is perfect, as always. :) Nancy
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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I will check that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Oh No, Barbara...you left me hanging in limbo when I read the end of this chapter. You naughty girl, doubt if I'll sleep until you post the next one. I can't help but wonder if the caller and muffler guy is Bobby or one of his dysfunctional family members? I know he is suppose to be in jail but what if he escaped or something? Too many questions that I know you won't answer until the next chapter! Sigh. Well done....bless you, chey
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Oh No, Barbara...you left me hanging in limbo when I read the end of this chapter. You naughty girl, doubt if I'll sleep until you post the next one. I can't help but wonder if the caller and muffler guy is Bobby or one of his dysfunctional family members? I know he is suppose to be in jail but what if he escaped or something? Too many questions that I know you won't answer until the next chapter! Sigh. Well done....bless you, chey
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Poor Anna. Is she ever gonna get a break? Will she ever have a peaceful life?
So many women live their lives in fear like this. It seems so unfair.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Poor Anna. Is she ever gonna get a break? Will she ever have a peaceful life?
So many women live their lives in fear like this. It seems so unfair.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from deadprofit
Really good chapter. I Thought the muffler noise at the end worked well as a hook. Now I need to read the next chapter. Good job.
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Really good chapter. I Thought the muffler noise at the end worked well as a hook. Now I need to read the next chapter. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Very short, but quite to the point and did not fail this reader. I feel the scenes went very well. Please PM me and let me know how you are doing. My last visit was "a clean bill of health."
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Very short, but quite to the point and did not fail this reader. I feel the scenes went very well. Please PM me and let me know how you are doing. My last visit was "a clean bill of health."
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.