Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Part one, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from The Stranger
well Barabara, you have begun 2013 as you ended 2011 with yet another exceptional chapter of this most excellent book, I can only keep repeating myself as there is nothing to criticise, it just has that air of brilliance
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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well Barabara, you have begun 2013 as you ended 2011 with yet another exceptional chapter of this most excellent book, I can only keep repeating myself as there is nothing to criticise, it just has that air of brilliance
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the support.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Another great chapter my friend. And, Anna needs to wake up and realize how good and lucky she is to have Troy around. I like that they gave Anna the painting for her apartment.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Another great chapter my friend. And, Anna needs to wake up and realize how good and lucky she is to have Troy around. I like that they gave Anna the painting for her apartment.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
As I continue to read, I feel the ending coming soon and like any good book, I will be sorry when it is over. I do hope you will let us know when it is published.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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As I continue to read, I feel the ending coming soon and like any good book, I will be sorry when it is over. I do hope you will let us know when it is published.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the support.
Comment from rheabug
Your dedication to this project is a marvelous thing and I hope you won't start another until this is finished. I think a novel about New Orleans would be great in its time. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Your dedication to this project is a marvelous thing and I hope you won't start another until this is finished. I think a novel about New Orleans would be great in its time. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
This is another great chapter. Your description of the family in the living room are very real and cozy. I felt like participating, the surroundings, very well described. Great writing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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This is another great chapter. Your description of the family in the living room are very real and cozy. I felt like participating, the surroundings, very well described. Great writing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from oNray
Well written again. We are moving pretty slow, tell your muse your going to stop writing and start knitting that should fire her up
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Well written again. We are moving pretty slow, tell your muse your going to stop writing and start knitting that should fire her up
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
I always look for Monday morning because I am sure to find your post. This piece like the rest of the novel is fine reading.
About taking the muse off your hands I am willing and ready. As a retired naval officer, chivalry comes as a second habit. But, be careful since muse can be finicky. If you let her go once, she may never return to you. If you decide, pass it on to me. I'll be too happy to have her locked in my study.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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I always look for Monday morning because I am sure to find your post. This piece like the rest of the novel is fine reading.
About taking the muse off your hands I am willing and ready. As a retired naval officer, chivalry comes as a second habit. But, be careful since muse can be finicky. If you let her go once, she may never return to you. If you decide, pass it on to me. I'll be too happy to have her locked in my study.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
This is a great chapter and I hung onto every word. It is clear that Anna is fitting in so well with the entire family. I don't think she is a passing fancy with Troy either. How are you ever going to eliminate Bobby, so that love can be declared? Great writing!
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Hello, barbara.
This is a great chapter and I hung onto every word. It is clear that Anna is fitting in so well with the entire family. I don't think she is a passing fancy with Troy either. How are you ever going to eliminate Bobby, so that love can be declared? Great writing!
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Bobby will be taken care of, the only way I see fit for what he's done. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from purrfect tale
I want to scream at Anna and ask if she's nuts. She has to see that Troy is interested! I'm thinking the picture was planned as a gift to Anna all along. They just did it in a way that would make it impossible for her to refuse. No spags today.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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I want to scream at Anna and ask if she's nuts. She has to see that Troy is interested! I'm thinking the picture was planned as a gift to Anna all along. They just did it in a way that would make it impossible for her to refuse. No spags today.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from michaelrandolph
Another great chapter incorporating great dialogue. Easy to read keeping me drawn into the story. This is a very compelling book as we look at the society evolving these days.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Another great chapter incorporating great dialogue. Easy to read keeping me drawn into the story. This is a very compelling book as we look at the society evolving these days.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.