Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from amada
This is a very captivating chapter. It raises so well the awareness of to the subject of abuse and its consequences in the psyche of a person. Very touching!
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This is a very captivating chapter. It raises so well the awareness of to the subject of abuse and its consequences in the psyche of a person. Very touching!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Hi Barbara!
You're doing a very important social work for those abusive women. I am so glad that Anna is willing to leave Michael with someone else.
Another WONDERFUL new chapter! THANKS!!
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Hi Barbara!
You're doing a very important social work for those abusive women. I am so glad that Anna is willing to leave Michael with someone else.
Another WONDERFUL new chapter! THANKS!!
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from emmaysavage
Thank for this lovely day with Anna and Troy, lovely even with her nervousness and the forshadowing. I like reading a book where I like most of the characters,and attention is paid to their development.
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Thank for this lovely day with Anna and Troy, lovely even with her nervousness and the forshadowing. I like reading a book where I like most of the characters,and attention is paid to their development.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
She has had far more patience than I would. I hate the suspense. This too is an excellent chapter.I saw in your notes you are working up to the climax.[so to speak] I could sense it. Things have been going well for a while.I look forward to Anna truly being free of threats and worries.
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She has had far more patience than I would. I hate the suspense. This too is an excellent chapter.I saw in your notes you are working up to the climax.[so to speak] I could sense it. Things have been going well for a while.I look forward to Anna truly being free of threats and worries.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
A ha! Good - finally. A kiss in the very near future. I enjoyed this, Barbara. Love the interaction of your characters and the display of feeling and emotion. Well done. I look forward to reading about the kiss. :o)
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A ha! Good - finally. A kiss in the very near future. I enjoyed this, Barbara. Love the interaction of your characters and the display of feeling and emotion. Well done. I look forward to reading about the kiss. :o)
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
In showing how a victim of abuse builds her self confidence, you have indeed succeeded, Barbara. Seems that Troy understands about it too. I like how Anna talks with the child, it is done every time, everywhere, by a mother. Delightful chapter.
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In showing how a victim of abuse builds her self confidence, you have indeed succeeded, Barbara. Seems that Troy understands about it too. I like how Anna talks with the child, it is done every time, everywhere, by a mother. Delightful chapter.
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Thank you for your kind review and understanding.
Comment from Tammara
What another great chapter, I really liked reading this one! Anna has decided on where she wants the painting, and she's willing to leave Michael with someone else. Anna still freaks out a little over hearing the muffler sound, and says she thinks she likes Italian food. I also like the fact that she says she will handle going to the support group on her own. This was a really good chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! :)
Tammara
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What another great chapter, I really liked reading this one! Anna has decided on where she wants the painting, and she's willing to leave Michael with someone else. Anna still freaks out a little over hearing the muffler sound, and says she thinks she likes Italian food. I also like the fact that she says she will handle going to the support group on her own. This was a really good chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! :)
Tammara
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding the hints I am leaving. I was worried nobody would catch them.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I can tell Brian is very talented and I love the picture. I feel so sorry for Anna who jumps at the sound of a car muffler. It is going to take her a long time to get over what Bobby did to her. I hope in time she will build up her confidence and self esteem. Don't know what she would do without Troy and his family. A good chapter....bless you, chey
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Hi Barbara,
I can tell Brian is very talented and I love the picture. I feel so sorry for Anna who jumps at the sound of a car muffler. It is going to take her a long time to get over what Bobby did to her. I hope in time she will build up her confidence and self esteem. Don't know what she would do without Troy and his family. A good chapter....bless you, chey
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Wonderful chapter, didn't see any obvious spags:) But it did flow well and I enjoyed the continued building of Troy and Anna's relationship.
Well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Wonderful chapter, didn't see any obvious spags:) But it did flow well and I enjoyed the continued building of Troy and Anna's relationship.
Well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from axelbeariter
Dad takes a few naps throughout the day too./You need a quotation mark before Dad.----it takes a woman a very long time to build her self-esteem after an abusive relationship and to be able to trust another man./I'm glad I read that. My guy and his formerly abused girlfriend connected too quickly. I've got to re-write that scenario.----This was another great chapter, especially good in setting up what I figure will be an un-muffled confrontation by making Anna skittish a bout muffler sounds.
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Dad takes a few naps throughout the day too./You need a quotation mark before Dad.----it takes a woman a very long time to build her self-esteem after an abusive relationship and to be able to trust another man./I'm glad I read that. My guy and his formerly abused girlfriend connected too quickly. I've got to re-write that scenario.----This was another great chapter, especially good in setting up what I figure will be an un-muffled confrontation by making Anna skittish a bout muffler sounds.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and eagle eye. I have fixed the missing quote.
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Mr. Eagle at your service.
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You're a sweetheart. A hug is headed your direction.