Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

I was very happy to check my message box and see another chapeer. I never thought I would get into romances, but you and a couple of other friends got me into it. Go figure. I enjoyed your chaper qand couldn't spot any nits or spags.
hugs book

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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Very frightening. It must be awful to live in constant fear, especially with the responsibility of a child. Well written and great build-up of suspense~Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2012

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Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hi, Barbara. Poor Anna. She's growing stronger but the harassment continues. I wonder when all these are going to end. But well, it it end so does the story...:) Thanks for sharing. Now I understand the situation of abused wives much better.

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Comment from Rama Rao

Excellent

Excellent as usual Barbara. If it's a Monday, there will be a post from you. You are sticking to it, and I am so glad.
Anna took a bite of her sandwich." -delete "
Otherwise as immaculate as ever.
Tell me, when you have a flat tire, don't you fix it yourself? Why wait for someone to come and assist?

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Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job wrikting this chapter where anna is trying to move forward, make decisions and then finds her tire flattened and a note left on her window.

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Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

Anna is indeed wise to wait before opening any form of correspondence as she will need witnesses as to its validity should it prove to be menacing

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Comment from Dave M

Exceptional

Barbara,

Sounds like some people won't give up, and Anna was smart to stay in her car. I enjoyed reading this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.

Dave

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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

Whew. I was so afraid she was going to get out and see what that paper was. That is an old trick. Boy, that Bobby doesn't give up easy. Another great chapter.

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Comment from ScarletClearwater

Excellent

I saw no Spag, but I was reading diligently so, sorry if I missed anything. Great job with thispiece and nice use of descriptives and dialogue.

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Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen

Excellent

Promise if it happens again[,] you'll call either Dad or me.

After listening a few moments[,] she squirmed as different types of harassment were

I guess it's good to know that[,] under the circumstances[,] my life is normal. I'm pretty sure it's not good to be

I'm sure this is another form of harassment[.]

I wonder what they're up to now, stealing Troy's medical records.

Roberta

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012

I appreciate your eagle eye and support.