Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "part 1 Chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
So Anna's stalker is an armed robber. This is a grisly turn of events. I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
So Anna's stalker is an armed robber. This is a grisly turn of events. I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Fluffyhead
As usually another great chapter. Am happy Anna is going in a positive direction. Hope she stays on that road.Always a pleasure.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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As usually another great chapter. Am happy Anna is going in a positive direction. Hope she stays on that road.Always a pleasure.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - as always, well written with great pace. My only regret was its brevity. I enjoy your work and would love to keep on reading. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Hi Barbara - as always, well written with great pace. My only regret was its brevity. I enjoy your work and would love to keep on reading. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JW
Your story is progressing nicely. And this chapter makes another good addition. No spags were found. The storyline advanced realistically and you definitely left a nice hook.
Good job. JW
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Your story is progressing nicely. And this chapter makes another good addition. No spags were found. The storyline advanced realistically and you definitely left a nice hook.
Good job. JW
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job wriitng this chapter about them finding the person who's been harassing anna, unless bobby is using his truck and staying with him
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job wriitng this chapter about them finding the person who's been harassing anna, unless bobby is using his truck and staying with him
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
How frightening this must be. There needs to be a better program to inform those at risk from family members released from prison.I know from experience even if you are to be notified, it rarely happens. Seems like we as a society could do better. Well written with suspense enticing the reader to want more~ Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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How frightening this must be. There needs to be a better program to inform those at risk from family members released from prison.I know from experience even if you are to be notified, it rarely happens. Seems like we as a society could do better. Well written with suspense enticing the reader to want more~ Debbie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I agree, thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, so both Troy and Anna have soft hearts... Now what about Slim? There's another danger lurking. An interesting chapter, relatively short I'm not ready to stop reading yet...:)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Hi, Barbara, so both Troy and Anna have soft hearts... Now what about Slim? There's another danger lurking. An interesting chapter, relatively short I'm not ready to stop reading yet...:)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from RebelRose
I had a feeling she'd recognize the guy but with a different name. Now the plot thickens. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I had a feeling she'd recognize the guy but with a different name. Now the plot thickens. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ...
Once again, this relatively short chapter of your book leaves the reader anxious to read the next one.
This is well written with plenty of vivid imagery and there is nothing to suggest changing.
Thank you for sharing this with us and, of course, I now look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Hullo Barbara ...
Once again, this relatively short chapter of your book leaves the reader anxious to read the next one.
This is well written with plenty of vivid imagery and there is nothing to suggest changing.
Thank you for sharing this with us and, of course, I now look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from PoetSpirit
Very interesting drama, and very well written! I've been away for a while so I'm not familiar with the story line, I will have to go back and read the rest. Very Nice work!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Very interesting drama, and very well written! I've been away for a while so I'm not familiar with the story line, I will have to go back and read the rest. Very Nice work!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.