Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

This is agood chapter, full of tension and you've left your readers a good hook in leaving Troy still to evade the loon in the Chev truck ...

Well done.

Patrick

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Why in the world was bobby released from jail? I thought he would be there for a long time. Now he has Anna and I fear for her life. I was afraid we hadn't heard the last from Bobby but I was hoping he couldn't get to Anna with all the protection she has. This is an exciting chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Bobby's explanation as to how he got out of jail will be April 1st post. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job writing this chapter of your book where everyone is rushing to warn anna, but it is too late. she's already been taken.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

A really exciting chapter, barbara. Things are ramping up and winding down at the same time. Brisk dialogue set a nice tone of urgency. Well done. Bev

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Writingfundimension on 18-Mar-2012

You're welcome, barbara.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Hi Barabar,

Another good chapter.

The Rodger's family (I think this should just be 'Rodger family' because it is not really possessive; like saying the Wilkey family...

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

I guess you're right. I'll take care of that.

Comment from ulster3

Exceptional

hello, barbara.
This exceptional chapter rings so true! Such dreadful things happen in these situations. I do hope Anna will be rescued in time.
Warmly, Rebecca

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review and your support.

Comment from Rattler

Excellent

Thanks, I have been waiting for your next chapter. You story is so exciting. I look forward to you next one.

Thee Brian hes a damn good artist too.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Rattler on 18-Mar-2012

I meant to say Tell Brian he's a damn good artist..

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

A nice chapter full of action and tension. This leans more to the thriller genre than romance and you're good at writing it.
one little gremlin:

The office[r] pointed

luv jada

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thank you for catching that. I will take care of it.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Looks like I have given all the 6 ratings I can give you until next month
Barb I was so anxious to see what was going to happen next (so I had to go back once in awhile to see what I missed)

Don't take too long for your next exciting episode
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

I've been on spring break so I was able to post during the week. I go back to work Monday, so it will be next Sunday before I can post again. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Mar-2012

I'm patient I can wait
Love
ert

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Exceptional

what a fast-moving chapter,
Barbara... such a lot of
detail on what's going on..
describing the scene perfectly.

Troy pulled in (at) a gas station
I'll be there (in) about 10 minutes

Most impressive, my friend, and deserving of a six.

Margaret

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Those little words have been giving me a fit lately. I don't know why I'm not catching their omissions when I edit. Thank you for your eagle eye and support.