Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "part three, Chapter 19"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
The pot keeps boiling, but the pages won't turn any more. I enjoyed reading this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Barbara,
The pot keeps boiling, but the pages won't turn any more. I enjoyed reading this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
From one cliffhanger to another. All the while since Bobby shoved Anna into her apartment, her friends have been on the outside wanting to be inside as Ann faces crisis after crisis. At least they know Bobby is dead now. He can never hurt Anna again, but the real suspense keeps elevating as the doctors try to save Anna.
The dialog among her friends sounds realist as they try to hold hope. Now, it's Code Blue, a sure sign that a patient's heart has stopped beating. Is it Anna? If so can it be restarted.
I feel like I;m right there with Anna and working with the doctors to save he. Please don;t make me wait too long.
Love and Irish Hugs for this six-star chapter,
Roger
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
From one cliffhanger to another. All the while since Bobby shoved Anna into her apartment, her friends have been on the outside wanting to be inside as Ann faces crisis after crisis. At least they know Bobby is dead now. He can never hurt Anna again, but the real suspense keeps elevating as the doctors try to save Anna.
The dialog among her friends sounds realist as they try to hold hope. Now, it's Code Blue, a sure sign that a patient's heart has stopped beating. Is it Anna? If so can it be restarted.
I feel like I;m right there with Anna and working with the doctors to save he. Please don;t make me wait too long.
Love and Irish Hugs for this six-star chapter,
Roger
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Your hugs are worth a lot more than six stars. Thank you.
Comment from abbasjoy
Another great chapter. The reader's heart goes out to Troy and the others as they wait patiently to hear some good news about Anna. The suspense has me on the edge of my seat, and left guessing whether or not Anna will survive, because we know that Michael will be well cared for by his surrogate grandparents as well as Troy. Again, the long reaching tentacles of abuse are still trying to wrap themselves around so many who are affected because of this one person,Bobby.You can't help but dislike this man and all abusers. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Another great chapter. The reader's heart goes out to Troy and the others as they wait patiently to hear some good news about Anna. The suspense has me on the edge of my seat, and left guessing whether or not Anna will survive, because we know that Michael will be well cared for by his surrogate grandparents as well as Troy. Again, the long reaching tentacles of abuse are still trying to wrap themselves around so many who are affected because of this one person,Bobby.You can't help but dislike this man and all abusers. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Dang, I don't know what code blue means, but if nurses and doctors are running into the recovery room, I doubt if its a good sign :(
Excellent as always :)
Cheers,
Raz
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Dang, I don't know what code blue means, but if nurses and doctors are running into the recovery room, I doubt if its a good sign :(
Excellent as always :)
Cheers,
Raz
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and no it's not a good thing.
Comment from Readywriter52
It looks like Anna still has a long way to recover. Bobby really messed with her. Troy sounds very concerned. It appears that they are worried that Rodgers might have friends who will continue his vendetta.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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It looks like Anna still has a long way to recover. Bobby really messed with her. Troy sounds very concerned. It appears that they are worried that Rodgers might have friends who will continue his vendetta.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from inkedone
I'll give it five stars for writing skills. You write well, however, I'm not a huge fan of romance novels. My opinion of writing material doesn't really matter though. You're writing is what matters. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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I'll give it five stars for writing skills. You write well, however, I'm not a huge fan of romance novels. My opinion of writing material doesn't really matter though. You're writing is what matters. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the stars. I understand that personal preferences are different. I don't like thrillers or fantasy. Thank you.
Comment from dportwood
barbara,
Oh boy! Is this a cliffhanger or what? Your story always keeps the reader interested and wanting to find out what happens next. Good work.
Duane
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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barbara,
Oh boy! Is this a cliffhanger or what? Your story always keeps the reader interested and wanting to find out what happens next. Good work.
Duane
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sefiros
Wow. There's a lot of sappiness in this chapter. Everything's sugary sweet and personal relationships tested. On paper it sounds so cliched but these experiences are real. They happen every day. There is no way to go into personal conversations and not having it seem over-the-top. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Wow. There's a lot of sappiness in this chapter. Everything's sugary sweet and personal relationships tested. On paper it sounds so cliched but these experiences are real. They happen every day. There is no way to go into personal conversations and not having it seem over-the-top. Very nice work.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from fionageorge
Hi, Barbara. I've been away for a while, but was able to pick up on the story line very quickly with this (part) chapter. Your writing is still very descriptive, and you make good use of dialogue. The emotions are strong as are the characters.
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Hi, Barbara. I've been away for a while, but was able to pick up on the story line very quickly with this (part) chapter. Your writing is still very descriptive, and you make good use of dialogue. The emotions are strong as are the characters.
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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I am glad you are back. I have missed you. Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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xxxxxxx :o)
Comment from N.K. Wagner
We're going to hope the crash card isn't for Anna, but that was a good place to break, Barbara. Well written with no SPAGs. I like the continued worry that this isn't over yet. :) nancy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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We're going to hope the crash card isn't for Anna, but that was a good place to break, Barbara. Well written with no SPAGs. I like the continued worry that this isn't over yet. :) nancy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.