Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "part four, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from RaymondJohn
Having a younger child while another is in serious condition in a hospital is very hard. This is a good continuation of the story. Ray.
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Having a younger child while another is in serious condition in a hospital is very hard. This is a good continuation of the story. Ray.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job writing this chapter where anna finally wakes up and carries on a conversation with troy. i enjoyed reading it.
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this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job writing this chapter where anna finally wakes up and carries on a conversation with troy. i enjoyed reading it.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I am glad she is perking up. This brought back memories of my hospital experiences when they would take you for tests you didn't even understand-and I have a medical background. Great end to this chapter!!! Debbie
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I am glad she is perking up. This brought back memories of my hospital experiences when they would take you for tests you didn't even understand-and I have a medical background. Great end to this chapter!!! Debbie
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Comment from Mishelly
I really love Troy's commitment to Anna, and how he wouldn't leave her side until he knew she was ok. Having Anna going in and out of conscious is well written, and makes us wonder if she's going to make a complete recovery. You've kept the suspense going, and I can not wait to read the next post. I would have rewarded you six stars but because I've done this twice in the last thirty days, it won't let me do it again.
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I really love Troy's commitment to Anna, and how he wouldn't leave her side until he knew she was ok. Having Anna going in and out of conscious is well written, and makes us wonder if she's going to make a complete recovery. You've kept the suspense going, and I can not wait to read the next post. I would have rewarded you six stars but because I've done this twice in the last thirty days, it won't let me do it again.
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Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
You so deserve a six magnificently writing your latest chapter with Anne waking up seeing Troy asking about her bambino and needing a drink of h2o. written. I immensely enjoy your wonderful imagery, very find dialogue, great narrative voice and excellent detailed writing. I liked what Troy asked his Mom: Troy watched his family leave, then called after them. "Mom, can you bring a decent breakfast? The hospital cafeteria's getting old already." I loved your latest chapter, my talented friend. You did a praiseworthy job composing this chapter. I would recommend chapter to others to reviewers. The art work your hubby took is exquisite. Lovely day to you. Love ya...Melissa.
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Barbara,
You so deserve a six magnificently writing your latest chapter with Anne waking up seeing Troy asking about her bambino and needing a drink of h2o. written. I immensely enjoy your wonderful imagery, very find dialogue, great narrative voice and excellent detailed writing. I liked what Troy asked his Mom: Troy watched his family leave, then called after them. "Mom, can you bring a decent breakfast? The hospital cafeteria's getting old already." I loved your latest chapter, my talented friend. You did a praiseworthy job composing this chapter. I would recommend chapter to others to reviewers. The art work your hubby took is exquisite. Lovely day to you. Love ya...Melissa.
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Comment from elgone
I was glad to see this post and have something good to read. You write well and it is easy to read and stay concerned about the characters and their plights. I'm glad Anna is improving. I'm worried she will have some lasting health problems.
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I was glad to see this post and have something good to read. You write well and it is easy to read and stay concerned about the characters and their plights. I'm glad Anna is improving. I'm worried she will have some lasting health problems.
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Comment from sunnilicious
Hi Barbara. Another good chapter. Excellent dialogue writing. Nice job. Keep it up. Peace, love and happiness for always, Sunnilicious
Happy Memorial Day
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Hi Barbara. Another good chapter. Excellent dialogue writing. Nice job. Keep it up. Peace, love and happiness for always, Sunnilicious
Happy Memorial Day
Comment Written 28-May-2012
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Comment from purrfect tale
I'm glad you are making the recovery slow and realistic. Can't wait til she finds out her ex-husband is dead. That should help her recovery.
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I'm glad you are making the recovery slow and realistic. Can't wait til she finds out her ex-husband is dead. That should help her recovery.
Comment Written 28-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support. I want this novel to be as realistic as possible.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Will no doubt in my mind Barb,
you well deserve a 6 rating
What a relief to know that Anna has come out of her coma
Now guess we will need to wait and see what the Nurse said
Gert
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Will no doubt in my mind Barb,
you well deserve a 6 rating
What a relief to know that Anna has come out of her coma
Now guess we will need to wait and see what the Nurse said
Gert
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
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You know ,you are welcome
Gert
Comment from Gungalo
Anna has come to and is full of questions. How much will they tell her? It's been such a long time coming that everyone is happy,
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Anna has come to and is full of questions. How much will they tell her? It's been such a long time coming that everyone is happy,
Comment Written 28-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for fine writing Barbara.