Splendor
Life is all about love.96 total reviews
Comment from N.K. Wagner
What a sweet love story, Bob! You gave us just enough of both characters to be able to fill in the blanks on our own. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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What a sweet love story, Bob! You gave us just enough of both characters to be able to fill in the blanks on our own. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much, Nancy. I do so appreciate your input. Bob
Comment from Jacq77
Excellent use of only 55 words. You did this well and said a lot in those few words. I've met many such confirmed batchelors who say "I do" after meeting the love of their life. I hope you do well in the contest.
Good one! :-)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Excellent use of only 55 words. You did this well and said a lot in those few words. I've met many such confirmed batchelors who say "I do" after meeting the love of their life. I hope you do well in the contest.
Good one! :-)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much, Jacq. A belated welcome aboard Fanstory. I have been away for a few months and missed you. I appreciate your time and review ...Bob
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Many thanks for the welcome! :-)
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
A romantic short, short story. I count 55 words exactly. I don't know how you put such emotion and a show of love and romance into such a short work, but you did, and did it beautifully! Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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A romantic short, short story. I count 55 words exactly. I don't know how you put such emotion and a show of love and romance into such a short work, but you did, and did it beautifully! Enjoyed!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you sincerely, MW. I appreciate your time and your review. Bob
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You are welcome. God Bless! MN :)
Comment from robina1978
Excellent picture to complement this short story. You told a lot in so few words. A confirmed bachelor meeting someone in spring and the saying yes in autumn. Most original. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Excellent picture to complement this short story. You told a lot in so few words. A confirmed bachelor meeting someone in spring and the saying yes in autumn. Most original. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Of course it could have been two years since that spring, too. LOL...Thanks so much for your kind review, Ine. Bob
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Yes tha5t is right, Bob:)
Comment from barkingdog
Hi Bob,
I like your theme very much. There is nothing like young love in bloom.
I have a problem with one word--poking. Poking seems painful. Young flowers/blooms/ emerge/peek/venture (something adventurous, innocent and hopeful.)
Otherwise, it's lovely.
:) ellen
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hi Bob,
I like your theme very much. There is nothing like young love in bloom.
I have a problem with one word--poking. Poking seems painful. Young flowers/blooms/ emerge/peek/venture (something adventurous, innocent and hopeful.)
Otherwise, it's lovely.
:) ellen
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Something to consider for sure. Thanks so much, Ellen. Bob
Comment from amahra
Glad you added the three words. Great story of a budding romance and loved the abstract art that you chose for this writing. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Glad you added the three words. Great story of a budding romance and loved the abstract art that you chose for this writing. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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And thanks to you and all your help, Amahra. Blessings. Bob
Comment from EMB
So they must've had a really hot summer, huh? :) This was great, Bob, as only it can be coming from the likes of you. Excellent use of the seasons and the bachelor's change of heart. Very smart.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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So they must've had a really hot summer, huh? :) This was great, Bob, as only it can be coming from the likes of you. Excellent use of the seasons and the bachelor's change of heart. Very smart.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much, Ed. I always appreciate your input. Of course it was a hot summer....LOL...Bob
Comment from Mrs Jones
Splendor in the grass...remember that movie. I love the last line. The words are beautifully romantic. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Rose
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Splendor in the grass...remember that movie. I love the last line. The words are beautifully romantic. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Rose
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Natalie Wood and Warren Beatty....right? LOL..Thanks so much, Rosie. I forgot...do you have a horse in this race? XXX000 Bobbie
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Yes, the rank outsider. LOL.
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I wouldn't say that. I remember now....I liked it a lot. Thanks again for the six stars btw. XX00 Bobbie
Comment from katz meow
Yes, you did it Bob! This little love story caught my heart. An interesting tail, and such a sweet read. You did an exceedingly wonderful job with 55 words...Katz
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Yes, you did it Bob! This little love story caught my heart. An interesting tail, and such a sweet read. You did an exceedingly wonderful job with 55 words...Katz
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Ahhh! Thanks so much, my friend. Take care of yourself...Bob
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Ahhh! Thanks so much, my friend. The six stars are wonderful. Take care of yourself...Bob
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a lovely little love story - short and sweet and to the point - most enjoyable. Good luck in the competition, Bob. Giddy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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This is a lovely little love story - short and sweet and to the point - most enjoyable. Good luck in the competition, Bob. Giddy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Hi, Giddy. Good to hear from you again. Sincere thanks. Bob