Comment from
kra-z-ka-z
oooHHheee! This is FREAKY!! I had boogie man visitors as a child. Hell, sometimes I still do! (That's right - I'm a pussy girl) I have a friend seriously afraid of clowns. This big, burly, biker, convict with tats every where...hahaha
In the sentence "I cover my my head, but there (they're) in there, you see?"
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
Thanks for the review, kra-z-ka-z, and for pointing out that typo...I'll take care of it!
Comment from
Evelyn Fort Stewart
I used to kind of like cute clowns but the picture of this one makes me want to run the other way. I don't want clowns in my head my friend. Good job, the music definitely adds to the eerie feel. God loves you and we do too.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
Thanks for the wonderful review. And, don't worry, they don't stay inside your head for too long. They get out, eventually...
Thanks, again.