Comment from Sonaleeka

Excellent

Amazingly captivating and refreshing i can say.I enjoyed the journey along with your writing.Keep coming new poems.Best of luck for contest .

God bless!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thanks very much for your wonderful review, Sonaleeka. And while the poem is not doing very well in the contest, I sincerely appreciate your encouraging words!

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

this is a exquisite piece of poetic art! you have captured perfectly the requirements of the contest! and the tone is really eerie!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thanks so much, Rebekka, I am very happy you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate your enthusiastic review and those six stars. While it is not doing very well in the contest, it was still a great deal of fun to write.

Thanks so much again!

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This poem is definitely chilling as a horror poem should be. The AABB rhyming remains consistent with use of lots of creepy words. The end was surprising as many thought ran through my mind about who this monster could be.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thank you, seaglass, I really appreciate your comments. And while it is performing horribly in the contest, it was still a lot of fun to write. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the horror poem promt. I like the description that you use. Great picture as well. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thanks for your kind comments and review, rrabinow.

reply by rrabinow on 28-Jul-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very well written poetic entry in this horror poem contest! I guess if you were to personify suicide, you would have to have to say it resembles this! This was well written, with vivid, descriptively expressive articulate language! Well done, good luck in the comp! Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thank you, Roy, very much. Your comments and five star rating are greatly appreciated.

reply by royowen on 28-Jul-2014

You're most welcome.

Comment from DALLAS01

Exceptional

This is a definite second read in order to reap and ingest the sobering thought. So well written, dripping with the life blood of an expert master (or) mistress of horror. Good luck in the contest, sounds like a winner to me.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thank you, DALLAS, and I wish it looked like a winner to more voters as it is getting trounced in the booth right now. But, at least you feel it's a winner, and that is enough for me, my dear friend. Thanks for the six stars and your generous support. I truly appreciate it!

reply by DALLAS01 on 28-Jul-2014

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Comment from livelylinda

Exceptional

Well, Mr. Author: There are no Author notes, its more than 3 stanzas long, it rhymes just fine and there certainly isn't any humor within. This was really scary and the ending totally surprised me, was not expecting suicide. Thought it was some seductress demon, preying on men. Fantastic write and I'm thinkin' this could be a winner! livelylinda

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Thanks, livelylinda, and I am glad that you think it's a winner, at least. Unfortunately, the majority of voters do not happen to agree with you as it is performing pretty poorly in the voting booth. But, as long as you believe it is a winner, that's good enough for me, my dear friend. I appreciate your very kind comments and those shiny six stars!

Thanks again!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is super horrific and provides a grisly, gut-wrenching characterization of this ultimately evil ghoul with terrifying plans for those he who choose to end their lives.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014

Thanks for the encouraging comments and generous rating, Bill. I certainly appreciate it.

Comment from Drew Delaney

Exceptional

I think this deserves a six star. I hate horror stories, but I was impressed how you used suicide as a catalyst to write this. Very well thought out and I think a real great contender in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014

Thanks so much for the kind and encouraging review and six star rating, Drew. I appreciate you giving it a shot even though it isn't exactly your cup of tea.

As far as the contest goes, it is getting killed in the voting booth, so I would hardly call it a "contender". But it was sure a lot of fun to write!

Thanks again.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

She is your horror, he will torture you before she kills you. She will deliver your soul to the devil. She warned you, so did others You failed to listen. She used only a little deceit to get you in to her lair. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014

Thank you for your kind review, Nellie. Much obliged.