Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is a powerful poem. I like the line you repeat "There's a whole lotta man in that little boy. "

Your rhyme is so natural. The emotions grab you in this poem. Terrific job.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them very much.

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

As always a pleasure to read and to think about. It's not always about ourselves in life we are not solitary our decisions make ripples across other lives

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks for your comments. Appreciate them.

Comment from gypsymoth

Excellent

I've never heard that expression before. I imagine the words
stay in your head and soon they apply to you. Your dad knew what he was talking about. Well done.
Gypsymoth

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Excellent poem with a good smooth rhythm. Strong wording enhances each stanza. I find no fault. Thank you for sharing. Shalom my friend.

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015

Thank you for you complimentary response. Appreciate it very much.