Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

This is a good story in a poem. It seems the Bears won - Rusty too. so all is well that ends well. Bear is not a pleasant meat to eat, so the Cowboys was lucky in that too. Kids would enjoy this story.
Rose

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. I've never eaten bear. I've heard it's greasy. Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

A cute little cowboy adventure...with bears....At Sequoia National Park I tried to avoid bears..at all cost , but when in sleeping bag my sister threw Fritos in fire appealing to bears....As they came close, my little dog ran to protect me challenging the bears! Now I knew he would get scared and return to me..bear behind...
It all worked out but I had to become a statue for awhile...
Jerry did the right thing!...
Cute poem...It played like a movie...

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang's latest adventure. You never know with bears.