Free Verse Collection
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Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, I viewed this write as a reminder of our resolve regarding the depth of our acceptance of what will be, versus the effort to change circumstances with more concentrated thought. Wonderful poetry such as this allows the reader to personally interpret the message, which I find inspiring...
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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In my opinion, I viewed this write as a reminder of our resolve regarding the depth of our acceptance of what will be, versus the effort to change circumstances with more concentrated thought. Wonderful poetry such as this allows the reader to personally interpret the message, which I find inspiring...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Eve. The poem was deliberately written in a way to allow open interpretation.
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You are very welcome, Tony, and I presumed as much - thank you for your thought provoking write...Eve
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, that's a lot to think on. Of course on our farm, cows don't go to slaughter. It's one of those benefits to reproductive potential, but the steers go for sure.
Of course, that wasn't your point, and your point is well taken, or at least what I got out of it was. I took from it not to worry, which is what I ruminate on most. It won't add to or subtract from my days.
At any rate, it's a good poem and I appreciate the share. Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Wow, that's a lot to think on. Of course on our farm, cows don't go to slaughter. It's one of those benefits to reproductive potential, but the steers go for sure.
Of course, that wasn't your point, and your point is well taken, or at least what I got out of it was. I took from it not to worry, which is what I ruminate on most. It won't add to or subtract from my days.
At any rate, it's a good poem and I appreciate the share. Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Yes, the poem was more about worry than about cows!
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Well, sometimes I worry about cows, too. Haha. Glad I got it right.
Comment from RodG
I really like how you put us in the hooves of this cow and make us ponder what she's "ruminating" about. But seriously, you make each reader question his own values and priorities. I also like the imagery used to describe her in stanza 1 and her "bovine essence of eternity." Well done, my friend. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I really like how you put us in the hooves of this cow and make us ponder what she's "ruminating" about. But seriously, you make each reader question his own values and priorities. I also like the imagery used to describe her in stanza 1 and her "bovine essence of eternity." Well done, my friend. Rod
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Rod. Perhaps we sometimes ruminate too much. Worry can be pretty self-destructive.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This asks a very good question. I don't think any of us have the "right" answer. I suppose you ask that of us as well. Will deeper thinking make us more secure or happier? You tell, so eloquently, a story of a bovine that lives content not knowing that we will send her eventually to the slaughterhouse. Would it make a difference if she knew? Good question. Perhaps ruminations won't make us feel more secure, but does that mean it is not worthwhile, still to ruminate? We may never know, but if we grow my ruminating than, what's the harm? I love the searching questions you ask us. This is well told and thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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This asks a very good question. I don't think any of us have the "right" answer. I suppose you ask that of us as well. Will deeper thinking make us more secure or happier? You tell, so eloquently, a story of a bovine that lives content not knowing that we will send her eventually to the slaughterhouse. Would it make a difference if she knew? Good question. Perhaps ruminations won't make us feel more secure, but does that mean it is not worthwhile, still to ruminate? We may never know, but if we grow my ruminating than, what's the harm? I love the searching questions you ask us. This is well told and thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Jesse, for connecting so deeply with my poem, and for the sixth star. I sometimes think that we worry too much and to llottle purpose.
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Yes, many of us worry too much. I used to worry a lot about my failures in the past and my plans for the future. Now I spend more time in the present. It feels better that way. You encourage us to think about not thinking too much. Funny how that sounds, yet you make a great point.
Jesse
Comment from Wetbelly01
Wow!... This is a great piece!
I betcha she makes some GREAT stakes!.... LOL!....
I like your sentimental approach to this inevitable ending...
My compliments on this fine piece!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Wow!... This is a great piece!
I betcha she makes some GREAT stakes!.... LOL!....
I like your sentimental approach to this inevitable ending...
My compliments on this fine piece!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Bring on the BBQ! LOL
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Yep!... BarrRarrrr!!
Comment from Gloria ....
I really like this free verse, Tony. I think even choosing free verse as the form speaks to the paradox of "free" thinking or free anything really.
The poem's brevity says everything that is needed to be said, about thoughts or those dreaded ruminations past, present or future.
An exceptional poem in every way.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I really like this free verse, Tony. I think even choosing free verse as the form speaks to the paradox of "free" thinking or free anything really.
The poem's brevity says everything that is needed to be said, about thoughts or those dreaded ruminations past, present or future.
An exceptional poem in every way.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Gloria. I'm experimenting with free verse a bit more than I used to.
Comment from royowen
As they say in the classics, "ignorance is bliss" note the innocence of a child, no sense of impending doom there either. But nobody has the ability to take one of the least lauded beasts, and turn it into a work of artful beauty, much contemplation and art woven into your words, even the literal meaning sounds like a metaphorical wonder. Well done Tony, excellent job, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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As they say in the classics, "ignorance is bliss" note the innocence of a child, no sense of impending doom there either. But nobody has the ability to take one of the least lauded beasts, and turn it into a work of artful beauty, much contemplation and art woven into your words, even the literal meaning sounds like a metaphorical wonder. Well done Tony, excellent job, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Very many thanks, Roy. I really appreciate the depth of this review and the way in which you have connected with my poem. All the best, Tony
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My pleasure
Comment from donette1914
very nice poem but sad if she is to go to the slaughterhouse, but outstanding of how you write. a well penned poem i love the art work and this is a wonderful poem well done it was a pleasure
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very nice poem but sad if she is to go to the slaughterhouse, but outstanding of how you write. a well penned poem i love the art work and this is a wonderful poem well done it was a pleasure
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Donette. I appreciate your review and comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I was young my aunt have a calf named Hamburger. Now, Hamburger was an adorable calf, and I got to feed him with a bottle. I am sure you know how he got his name. I didn't eat beef for years. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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When I was young my aunt have a calf named Hamburger. Now, Hamburger was an adorable calf, and I got to feed him with a bottle. I am sure you know how he got his name. I didn't eat beef for years. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Barbara. I appreciate your review and anecdote. We once had an ornery goat that we called Vindy - short for Vindaloo -
and for much the same reason! LOL Best wishes, Tony